Intense

[vericus]

I was feeling nostalgic for the days when I first picked up Transformers fanfiction, and my first introduction to Prowl and Jazz was as Optimus Prime's continuously-arguing SIC and 3IC. So I decided to write a short little snippet in that theme. Unsurprisingly, it grew. This may be continued, as I have a plot bunny I'm toying with tying this

Comments

[flyingtwinkie]

This was great. I loved your characterization, it was right on. Please continue this one. ^.^

[vericus]

Glad you liked. It took me awhile to get right, but I'm happy enough with what I have that I may just continue. :)

Also, icon love.

[saberfrost]

LOL The teasing at the end was great!
Don't end it!

[vericus]

Glad you liked! The two of them just sorta took the teasing and ran with it...they WERE supposed to have a much different conversation. I liked the one they came up with better. XD

[ex_naggingf]

That was wonderful. I loved the tension you built and the awesome resolution. I'd love to see more!

[vericus]

Glad you enjoyed! I'm definitely considering continuing...just got to organize some ideas here.

[prancingtiger86]

you have definitely got to continue this one, the characterisation was perfect. loved it!

[vericus]

Happy to provide enjoyable fic. *bow* Also to traumatize and kill Decepticons. *runs off before Jazz can get her for stealing his line*

[prancingtiger86]

I absolutely loved that line lmao *provides distraction so Jazz can't catch up with vericus* lol

[gimme_cover]

LOL, Love Prowls last line!

I hope you do more!!

[vericus]

Prowl is apparently a cheeky l'il bastard when it comes to interfacing, lol.