Intense

[vericus]

I was feeling nostalgic for the days when I first picked up Transformers fanfiction, and my first introduction to Prowl and Jazz was as Optimus Prime's continuously-arguing SIC and 3IC. So I decided to write a short little snippet in that theme. Unsurprisingly, it grew. This may be continued, as I have a plot bunny I'm toying with tying this

Comments

[baroness_lamia]

This was a fun read. I liked Prowl's characterization, how it goes from calm, to cool, to hot and argumentive! XD

I noticed that the italics are still up in the last few paragraphs, and I noticed a mistake your sentence: "Not comment was made on Jazz's response". I hope I'm not pulling an annoying Prowl here!

[vericus]

Yeah, I was kinda tired when I posted it, forgot to double-check the italics like I usually do. Fixed now. I'll go back and find and fix that sentence when I'm not actually skipping out on DnD...*runs off before her group hauls her back* Fixed the typo too.

[baroness_lamia]

Love the icon! Where'd you get it? [/random]

[vericus]

Um...*thinks, checks file* thefunkyicon!

I'd seen variations of it around for awhile before I finally decided to nab it. XD

[vericus]

Glad you enjoyed!

[herongale]

""Yes, emphasis on th' was, because there is no way you can honestly be slaggin' considerin' goin' through with it!" Jazz snapped. "Your own analysis says it has a 26.8% chance of success. Twenty-six point eight! That's well below your acceptable risk limit for anyone, an' you want to go on it yourself?!"

<-- that's where the italics get wonky.

But otherwise, this is a marvellously entertaining and sexy story. More is more... so if this ends up not being the end, I will not complain!

[vericus]

Haha, yeah, I was tired and forgot to go back and check my italics. I really need to find a way to do the italics automatically to avoid such problems. -.- Oh well, lol.

Glad you liked it, more is stewing in my brain currently, so there's a fairly good chance it might actually come out. :D

[okami_myrrhibis]

Oh please - continue this. I was snickering throughout most of it.

Though you might want to fix the formatting - it went italicized from the time Jazz nixes the mission thru the end.

[vericus]

I am thinking I'm gonna have to continue it. My muses are clamouring for more, lol.

Italics fixed, before I even saw the first comment about them. XD

[vixens_shadow]

*clamors with muses* XD

[vericus]

*throws muses a party* XD