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ci5rod
New Filk
Aug 12, 2013 23:58
I'm not entirely happy with this yet, but here goes:
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Uffington Hill 2013
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phillip2637
August 13 2013, 01:09:23 UTC
That's very nice. I like the parallels with the original combined with the unifying theme that completes each verse.
(I might be tempted to swap 'embraces' for 'encircles' near the end of verse one to get a different sound there but that's me being picky. :) )
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ci5rod
August 13 2013, 21:19:23 UTC
I did think about that, but I decided I like the repetition. I'll sleep on it some more, though.
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rdmaughan
August 13 2013, 09:51:51 UTC
Very nice. A bit long in the making if you were inspired after our wedding as that was fifteen years ago.
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ci5rod
August 13 2013, 21:20:16 UTC
Yes, it really was that long in the gestation. It was either your wedding or Phil & Lissa's, that much I'm sure of!
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tattercoats
August 13 2013, 17:32:08 UTC
Oh, that's very lovely indeed! I am honoured, and delighted that something of mine was there to move you.
I look forward to hearing you sing this one day, if I'm fortunate!
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ci5rod
August 13 2013, 21:20:45 UTC
I dare say I'll be persuadable at a filkcon soon :-)
(Eep. Now I have to learn to play it!)
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(I might be tempted to swap 'embraces' for 'encircles' near the end of verse one to get a different sound there but that's me being picky. :) )
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I look forward to hearing you sing this one day, if I'm fortunate!
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(Eep. Now I have to learn to play it!)
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