hmm...Im kinda all outa angst atm. I dont have any inspiration for an epilogue, really. It really needs another 5 chapters just to really go through all the fights and makeups and realizations they have, and i got nuthin. I think Ill leave it to the show to do that!!
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Arizona looked at Callie. "Hey remember when we were massive idiots?" Callie squinted thoughtfully at her girlfriend. "I guess, but there were so many times. Did you mean a specific time?" "Probably around that time my body had a baby, but my mind didn't." "Oh yeh I remember that. Some good bad times." "Totally." Then they had hot sex that wasn't cordoned by primetime standards for same-sex couples.
Sooooo amazing. Callie's speech? I actually had tears in my eyes. It was absolutely perfect! Definitely my favourite part of the entire story. You did an unbelievably amazing job of showing both of their perspectives and where they were coming from throughout the story. I loved it. Seriously, amazing. Btw, a sequel/epilogue would be incredible ;)
Wow! Totally flattered. Im so glad you liked Callie's speech. She has so much more to say, but I couldn't get it in without overdoing it. I'll think about it, but Im really out of inspiration, and unsure about how they will play it on the show. Thankyou so much for reading and commenting. I truly appreciate and am so happy you enjoyed it.
I could swear I saw that this was 5/5, but then my brain shut off and denial kicked in.
Please don't let this be the end. Pretty pretty please?
I NEED to know how Arizona fights for Callie. I need to read how they slowly rebuild the trust and their lives.
Please have a sequel. Pretty please? You could called it Fixated ... since Arizona is fixated on winning Callie back.
I NEED you to not have any type of life at all and continue this. I'm thoroughly depressed at the thought of not having this to look forward to.
This chapter was brilliant, by the way. I love protective Mark. And I just really would love it if you kept it going for about 80 more chapters. Give or take.
Haha! Chill Lady. I am super glad that you stuck with my story, and am v flattered that you want me to continue forever. Unfortunately I do not have that many ideas in my brain atm. I too would like to see their gradual return to sanity, but I'd really have to think about it. Right now I am gonna wait till the show happens, and then take it from there. A long hiatus could mean a sequel, but it really depends on what exactly happens in the show. If it does something stupid, I may feel the need to correct it. ANd I will call it Fixated, if i go ahead, so there. I like MArk too.
You never know. flattery often wins. But I do have other fic in the works. so hopefully that tickles your fancy.
Thankyou so much for liking and commenting. Its fun to have a fan.
I'm really sad to see this come to and end, but I think you did the right thing by not getting them back together. It would be rushed and it wasn't time for them. Even thought it's an open ending of sorts, I feel sure that they were able to find their way back to each other eventually. I've really enjoyed reading this, your writing and insight into the characters have been spot on all the way. Thank you!
Yes thankyou. I was trying to write them getting together, but it really just wasnt realistic. As soon as I started writing I was like, uh-oh. aint gonna happen.
Im so glad you enjoyed it, and am immensely grateful that my characterisations felt true for you. Totes appreciated, and you're welcome!
A great chapter and I can see why you left it there like that or ended it liked that I won't say I'm not disappointed because I am lol I wanted for them to be together in the end only because it's sad that they are not and that it drives home the point that they aren't together on the show either......There's heaps more I want to say but i wont! You done a really great job here! Well done!
I would love to read some more from you maybe something more happier though lol!
THanks Im real glad you enjoyed the fic. I know there is more to be written, but thats a different story. I have happier fics on my livejournal, but I think I've seen you there before. Im definitely working on something at the moment, but it'll be fodder for the hiatus.
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Epilogue:
Arizona looked at Callie.
"Hey remember when we were massive idiots?"
Callie squinted thoughtfully at her girlfriend.
"I guess, but there were so many times. Did you mean a specific time?"
"Probably around that time my body had a baby, but my mind didn't."
"Oh yeh I remember that. Some good bad times."
"Totally."
Then they had hot sex that wasn't cordoned by primetime standards for same-sex couples.
The End.
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Seriously, amazing.
Btw, a sequel/epilogue would be incredible ;)
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Please don't let this be the end. Pretty pretty please?
I NEED to know how Arizona fights for Callie. I need to read how they slowly rebuild the trust and their lives.
Please have a sequel. Pretty please? You could called it Fixated ... since Arizona is fixated on winning Callie back.
I NEED you to not have any type of life at all and continue this. I'm thoroughly depressed at the thought of not having this to look forward to.
This chapter was brilliant, by the way. I love protective Mark. And I just really would love it if you kept it going for about 80 more chapters. Give or take.
Thank you for sharing it with us.
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I like MArk too.
You never know. flattery often wins. But I do have other fic in the works. so hopefully that tickles your fancy.
Thankyou so much for liking and commenting. Its fun to have a fan.
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Im so glad you enjoyed it, and am immensely grateful that my characterisations felt true for you. Totes appreciated, and you're welcome!
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I would love to read some more from you maybe something more happier though lol!
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