Is This Fixable? (4/5)

[chwitchety]

Title: Is This Fixable? (4/5

Comments

[janice2010]

Just like Arizona, I feel hope too!!!! :-)
Cannot wait for the next chapter too see where you take it. I'm really sad that it's the last one though! :-(

You've done an excellent job here!

[chwitchety]

Haha!! Im glad you liked it so much. You might be sad it is the last chapter next, but I am definitely not. My patience is running thin at writing such angst on such a complex matter. I need a break - to go write fluff for a while. Thanks for commenting on the chapters.

[funkyshaz57]

I loved this chapter!!! Arizona's big rant is exactly how I feel - Its exactly what I wanted to scream at everyone who was calling her names and saying how horrible she was!!! So a huge big big thankyou to you for putting that in there!!!!

While I will say I am disappointed that they aren't back together not even a kiss lol I get that what they are doing if probably for the best at the moment! I was hoping they'd be back together before you ended this but I'm so happy with this chapter I can't really complain too much lol

Seriously great work! I so can't wait for the final chapter!

[chwitchety]

Thanks so much, I totally didn't mean for it to happen but the thing wrote itself and I ended up putting in that rant for Az when I wasnt even expecting it myself. You know you only have yourself to blame, because your comment back on the first chapter i had done on whim really made me think out az's character. I so know, i was tossing up whether to let them kiss or not, but it is definitely too soon. if callie allowed it, she would be a fool. Thanks so much for the encouragement and commenting, and hopefully the next will be out soon.

[iamyouknowiam]

Amazing, again. You really manage to capture both of their characters.
I liked Arizona's rant... even as a hardcore Team Callie fan I do understand where Arizona is coming from. I can easily acknowledge that Callie was partly to blame for the way things fell apart. That being said, I personally don't think that Arizona can justify the way she broke Callie's heart. Yes, she had her reasons, but did she have to do it so abruptly and without warning, and then just walk away? She had to know that that would absolutely devastate Callie. I don't think it's fair for Arizona to have to do all the work... I just hope that she will acknowledge the fact that she hurt Callie worse than Callie has ever been hurt before. And that (in my mind) isn't jutified just because Callie wasn't as happy for her as she could have been.
I can't wait until the last part is up :) definitely still my favourite post break up story.

[chwitchety]

Thanks so much for liking it and sticking with me. I am so pleased that Im getting the characters true. Yeh, i hear what you are saying, and the fact there is so much discussion popped up in the comments i know i am walking a fine line on a tough subject matter. Im going to go with: that this is Arizona's POV. Maybe Callie will pull her up on it? Who can say? Really appreciate the comments.

[silver222]

I have a whole lot of love for this chapter. There was just something about their interaction that really got me. Callie being a bit snarky before Arizona's semi speech which you really did a great job of writing and getting the emotions across and then you nailed again with the hug scene and the ending. This is a great story and this is definitely my favorite chapter to date. Can't wait to see how you wrap this up!

[chwitchety]

Thankyou so much for taking the time to comment. I totes appreciate it and am glad you liked it so much. This chapter kind of wrote itself in their interactions and those moments you mentioned felt very truthful to me, for Arizona. Im intrigued as to how this will wrap up, because i got next to nothing at the mo. Also just wanted to say your break-up fic was real sweet and in character too. So funny how you can get all out fights v calm communication and it is still totally conceivable. :D

[silver222]

lol love how you are intrigued about your own ending as well! Now that they are talking a bit and 'friends', it can only go up from here right?

Thanks for the note about my fic - I like a little bit of angst but I always end up with a good ending whenever I write about these two. :)

[jenrind]

I'm enjoying your fic and definitely approved of Arizona's rant, which I can see her delivering, particularly following Callie's woe is me issue

[ifabi]

This is SO damn good. So so so good. And Arizona saying all THAT, something like that has to happen. Like her saying something along those words at some point to Callie. I'm in love with this.

[chwitchety]

Wow! Thanks so much for all the praise, Im real glad you liked it. I didn't even know she was going to say all that, but it just naturally happened when I wrote it. I am waiting in antici-----pation as to how they will fix their breakup on the show. Really appreciate the comment!!