Is This Fixable? (4/5)

Nov 30, 2010 00:27

Title: Is This Fixable? (4/5 ( Read more... )

fanfiction, callie/arizona

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mumblingm00se November 29 2010, 15:22:44 UTC
My heart was in my mouth the whole time... then they hugged, and I think I was as relieved as they were.
Far too invested? lol

Good stuff x

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chwitchety November 29 2010, 22:47:48 UTC
Thanks so much! I know! It was tense to write as well. Really appreciate your comment.

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almicah November 29 2010, 15:23:06 UTC
Aaaaw thank god for this, after the cliffhanger. God I just wish Arizona could tell her what happened!

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chwitchety November 29 2010, 22:51:48 UTC
I felt bad for leaving a cliffhanger. It's fun to write but I know from my fav fics, that it is not fun to read. I know, I wanted to write that she just came back and said Im here and in love with you Callie, but AZ always seems kinda selfless. She always leaves it up to Callie to make her own decisions without trying to influence her, like when Callie's family abandoned her. Thanks for commenting! Glad you liked it.

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ashdo November 29 2010, 15:34:42 UTC
that chapter was so, SO good, seriously... the hug at the end was reaally overwhelming also. Great job !

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chwitchety November 29 2010, 22:53:15 UTC
haha! Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it. I just felt so sad for both of them when they hugged. Much appreciated!

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chwitchety November 29 2010, 23:41:16 UTC
Hmm...Thankyou for bringing this to my attention. I appreciate that you are invested in this story enough to write out a lengthy comment to elaborate your points. I know it sucks when a story you liked takes a turn. It sucks for me as well that I haven't managed to bring you along for the journey. So let me try to address the points you make and explain my reasoning ( ... )

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funkyshaz57 November 30 2010, 01:08:13 UTC
And in reply to chwitchey's reply to the post I replied to lol! I totally get where you're coming from - I like that you put in "FYI - I'm hurting to!' cos I think people are forgetting that anyways my post was in reply to the one above your's incase it didn't come out that way!

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funkyshaz57 November 30 2010, 00:19:51 UTC
Hi there! I just wanted to reply to your comment! I funnily enough respectfully disagree with what you said! I think her rant, was perfect and I think she was dead on..I don't think she was making excuses or justifying anything I think she was being honest and spoke the truth....Why should she have to justify anything ( ... )

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walking_weapon November 29 2010, 19:12:44 UTC
:D Yay an actual conversation! And a hug too!

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chwitchety November 29 2010, 23:42:39 UTC
Things can only get better?

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