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[chrisear]

So this is my first fanfic. It is for Brandywines au challenge post.
It is prompt #64:
Kirsten never lost her baby and it turned out to be a girl submitted by brucasnaleyfan1

I want to thank fruitya  for her great beta. She made a lot of helpful comments. But I am not that smart and good in writing so I couldn't realize all of her good ideas. She said: "this

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[katwoman76]

something went wrong with the lj-cut on this post. it's not working. :(

Ups, Ryan is dating..not his aunt this time, but his ...kind of ... sister now? Hehe.

[chrisear]

which cut do you mean? the one on my journal or the one in the OC collective?

Any ideas how to make my cut work on my journal?

[katwoman76]

the one in your journal.
maybe you forgot the closing tag in the end?

[chrisear]

lol, yeah there is no closing tag. Since I dont know how.

[mel39]

Something's not right about your post, as Kat says. I may be able to do something as the mod, I'll look into it.

[chrisear]

yeah I used rich text I think. I am not much of a HTML type.
Thats all pretty weird. But thanx for your help

[katwoman76]

You don't need a lot of html.
italic italic
bold bold
unterline underline
and optional (since lj adds one itself usually)
linebreak

all the other fancy stuff, you almost never need

[katwoman76]

You can't edit posts as a mod. :(
The stupid RichText-mode is just buggy, as usual.

[philippa_]

Ooh what a twist at the end. I did not see that coming. I just came across this, nice work.

[ocmiss]

That was really great!
Poor Ryan, he'll totally be between the Kirsten/Emma issue, as well as the whole family.
You should update somme more.

[dcook78]

oooh..Like the twist of Kirsten giving up a child from long before. How does Ryan seem to find these people that are connected to the Cohen's that they never knew.

Looking forward to more of this.

Dee