Fic: Analyzing the Predator (Zelenka/Dex, NC-17)

[chopchica]

I volunteered to write porny ficlets, and mmmchelle asked for Ronon/Radek and bondage. My brain shorted out at the word "bondage", and I instantly forgot the meaning of the word "ficlet". In addition, I decided that poor Ronon and Radek had never gotten to have sex in Predatory Analysis, and when all the dust had cleared, this porny little sequel was born

Comments

[mmmchelle]

Love the way Ronon hangs onto control, the way he can't tell Radek he wants to be touched, the way he stays silent even when he comes.

Nicely done. Thank you.

[chopchica]

Whee! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! It kind of got away from me a little bit with the length.

Poor Ronon is doomed. With each interaction, Radek is gathering more and more data.

[raveninthewind]

Deliciously porny--thanks for posting the sequel. :)

[chopchica]

Thanks! Glad you liked it!

[toniabarone]

Wow. Okay, if this keeps up this might be my new OTP. Love Radek an' yer Ronon is...well...huh. The only thing I keep stumbling over is that you emphesize their size so much, I keep seeing them as if the size ratio were more human/hobbit than human/human. I know it's not that bad, at worst Radek barely evens with Ronon's shoulders/armpits but still.

But. Wow. *L* And I LOVED how Shep an' Rodney jus', y'know, went with it. Any chance of more in this little 'verse?

[chopchica]

Well, after Predatory Analysis, I said that I was all done with this storyline, but since clearly I was a total liar, I'm not saying anything either way this time.

Sorry bout the size thing! But my god, Ronon is like twice Radek's size. I just can't get it out of my head!

[lillyjk]

I am now officially in love with this pairing...GrrRonon and SneakyRadek = love

you must write more of this pairing soon

[chopchica]

Hee! No promises, but I am glad you liked it!

[canadian_snoopy]

Guh.

And dude, you're DOING it to me again -- first with the Lorne/Parrish and now with the Ronon/Radek. What IS it with you and your evil, coercive powers?! *phears*

:o)))))))))))

And this is just FUNNY: “Me?” Radek’s voice was too innocent, and Ronon was not fooled. “I am only here to ensure your safety and welfare.”

Zelenka is a wily one and I'd be worried for Dex if the guy wasn't so obviously the complete opposite of worried ;oppppppppp

Wonderful stuff, as always!

[chopchica]

Yeah, Ronon isn't really crying himself to sleep over there.

Clearly I have some weird magnetic device that convinces people to like weird pairings that NOBODY WRITES! Mainly I'm doing this so that other authors will get hooked and write them as well.

[canadian_snoopy]

Hehehe -- given the absolute DERTH of Lorne/Parrish and Zelenka/Dex, tell me, how's that workin' for ya?

:opppppp

But hey! Don't give up the fight! *pumps fist*