Comments | chocolate_stew: RP App: Agni | Kuroshitsuji| cartography

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RP App: Agni | Kuroshitsuji| cartography_rp

Feb 03, 2009 04:18

kuroshitsuji, roleplay: accepted, roleplay app

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titsandheretics February 9 2009, 18:03:59 UTC

But this does not make Agni a blind follower. He has his own opinions on how to take care of the prince and his methods were overprotective.

Agni does not think too highly of himself. It could come across as self-sacrificing at times. It does not people end up hating him in the end so long as he gets things done. When praised for his actions, he immediately says that it’s because the prince gave him a second chance in life. He comes out as humble that way, always attributing his greatness to someone else.

change to past tense 8D

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greyrook_22 February 9 2009, 18:13:36 UTC

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OLD THIRD PERSON SAMPLE greyrook_22 February 13 2009, 14:23:19 UTC

Third Person Writing Sample:Agni opened Ciel’s closet to check if everything was in its proper place. Earlier the prince wanted to try and fold clothes again, to show Ciel that he was learning something in his stay in England. The last time Soma did this it ended up with all of Ciel’s clothes twisted into a pile that supposedly resembled an elephant. He secretly fixed the clothes and placed them in their respective hangers and shelves, but the prince got a hold of them when they had to wash them again ( ... )

NOT SO OLD THIRD PERSON SAMPLE greyrook_22 February 16 2009, 00:31:09 UTC

While he and the prince were staying in the Phantomhive mansion, Agni did his best to help with the chores, including the gardening. The garden was mostly managed by the Phantomhive family gardener, a young boy named Finnian. He claimed to get into trouble by being too strong and too enthusiastic, but Agni knew that he was the type who really wanted to be of help. He was a kind boy and surely his strength had a purpose. When he let Finnian help him with the cooking, they were able to save a lot of time with mashing the potatoes. Now it was his turn to help Finnian, who was a bit short for his age and had problems with reaching high places. So he let Finnian ride on his shoulders as they trimmed some of the trees ( ... )