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[OOC] ConCrit
Sticky post for any comments or criticism or what not on how I play. Anon is allowed and IP is off, though I don't mind if people tell me I'm horrible to my face (I'd rather they do, really).
This one's rather AU, but I'm hoping the personality (at least) is intact.
Please leave reasons or at least ways I can do stuff better for any crit ^_^ -
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This is a vast improvement over what the room used to be like.
At least the lizards seem easy enough to avoid, but I'm out of practice for real hunting. -
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This room has some of the strangest things in it...But at least I've found somewhere pleasant.
I don't know how often the humans use this box with the outdoors in it. Hopefully not too much.
((Kitty!Mello has found the ninja training box and is currently camping out in it. Feel free to poke me if you want ninjas to run into him ;P I'm usually ( Read more... ) -
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I've found a forest. It seems to be mostly deserted, but it fits my purposes.
I hope I am not taken from this world for that fucking room anytime soon. -
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...so I'm back in the room. I knew it was only a matter of time.
Heaven was boring anyway. Not that here is better. I'd rather go home. -
Hey, you, get off of my cloud
I'm still in this 'heaven' place. I've carved out a small place to hide and the angels mostly leave me alone. I'm not sure if I'd rather have been in the room than here...going home isn't an option, I know.
Either way its no good...
No. The room is better because it has chocolate.
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...I've been in this 'heaven' place again for at least a day. Leaving the 'police' back on that world was easy enough, but they came after me ( Read more... ) -
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I hate this world! There are too many humans here, and these ones are worse than others. Seem to think they run everything because they have shiny badges and flashing cars. They pulled me out of the park I was nicely staying in--barely hunting anything and trying my best to stay away from the damn humans--and dragged me down into the city ( Read more... ) -
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...I do not like this place. The 'angels' are too much like humans. If what Mikami says is correct, this place is little more than a large farce anyway.
I need to find a way out. Or perhaps speak with who or whatever is in charge.