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You'd Be Nice to Come Home to | Community | Jeff/Annie

Oct 03, 2011 00:00

You’d Be Nice to Come Home to
Community, jeff/annie
Jeff helps Annie move, but he’s not exactly happy with her moving in with her old flame and the guy she made out with during paintball. Inspired by a prompt by tilie12 at milady_milord.

And it seemed like if he didn’t say something soon, she was really going to have to walk away, back upstairs to her new room that ( Read more... )

jeff/annie, fanfic, community

Comments 28

poppypickle October 3 2011, 06:32:49 UTC

I think you would be nice to come home to.

<3333333333333 I love this.

chipping October 4 2011, 05:24:36 UTC

BUT COULD YOU IMAGINE THE FIRST TIME THAT JEFF WINGER CAME HOME TO SOMEONE WHO LOOOOOOOOOOVED HIM?

My heart hurts for that poor, damaged boy.

So glad you loved it. Your writing to me is like the hand of god writing Community canon, so it means a lot that you liked it. YAY.

thebadunkadunk October 3 2011, 07:18:45 UTC

OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG

Amazing. First of all, A+ for a Whitney burn. Second of all, really well-written and totally in character. Third of all, I loveeeeed this. It's so much perfection, I wish this were real

chipping October 4 2011, 05:30:10 UTC

OH WHITNEY. I tried to like her, I REALLY DID. But it had to be done, because that show? Is the worst.

I'm so glad you liked it! I kind of wish it were real toooo. Or maybe just the slightly jealous Jeff and the conversation where he insinuates that they could LIVE TOGETHER and Annie does not say no. That would make my life. Also, Troy with the "Everyone Poops" book. All of that would make my life.

Thanks again for reading! :)

ext_344042 October 3 2011, 07:34:17 UTC

This is a touching and lovely little stand alone fic. Well done. Though I would love to see Annie and Jeff sharing space while Troy and Abed are on one of their projects.

chipping October 4 2011, 05:34:16 UTC

Thanks so much! And now that you have put that plot bunny in my mind, it will probably have to be written. Like, the pillow fort gets out of hand and Annie has to escape to Jeff's apartment and things go from thereeeee.... and it will probably be smutty. So, just so that you know. You are awesome for suggesting that.

wednesdaya October 3 2011, 08:03:52 UTC

Lady Things! DO NOT OPEN TROY AND ABED AND JEFF AND ESPECIALLY YOU PIERCE! LMAO :D

I love this. I love how you write Jeff and Annie.

chipping October 4 2011, 05:36:05 UTC

I imagine her Period Fairy coin jar was in that box.

I'm so happy that you liked it. Thanks for reading... it makes me happy in my hear that my fellow Jeff/Annie shippers like the same crazy stuff I do. :D

jennynoname October 3 2011, 12:55:34 UTC

GUH.

I mean... I just... love. No other words.

The fact that Annie would have like, four boxes of pillows? Perfect. The entire group arguing in Annie's apartment? Perfect. Jeff giving Annie his jacket? PERFECT. (I am a sucker for that, not gonna lie) And then, and THEN a Whitney burn? PERFECT. I'm pretty sure everyone hates that show.

And then the ~feelings~ and the roommate offer and the kiss and... yep. Everything about this was just perfect. :)

chipping October 4 2011, 05:39:56 UTC

YAY. So glad I didn't completely butcher these characters. The dialogue on Community is so witty I fear I don't even get close to the way these characters just ARE. So I'm glad you thought it was bearable.

And no one likes Whitney. I hope that it gets cancelled and Community just gets that half hour so that it's a WHOLE HOUR LOOOOOOONG. My life would be complete.