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You’d Be Nice to Come Home to
Community, jeff/annie
Jeff helps Annie move, but he’s not exactly happy with her moving in with her old flame and the guy she made out with during paintball. Inspired by a prompt by tilie12 at milady_milord.

And it seemed like if he didn’t say something soon, she was really going to have to walk away, back upstairs to her new room that

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[eleventhimpala]

This is great! I would love for something like this to actually happen on the show.

You've got the characters' voices down perfectly, too!

[chipping]

Thank you! I hope we do get jealous!Jeff during the moving in episode. I feel like this would be wildly appropriate. Thanks for reading! I appreciate it, honey.

[all_you_wanted]

So lovely and so Jeff and Annie. And Britta's psych babble... priceless.

[chipping]

Jeff and Annie are lovely, so it's so easy to write things about them. And Britta's psychobabble is probably one of my new favorite things, ever.

[crittab]

Wow... I think I'm in love with you.

This was great. Somehow in character while still being totally out there. Great story :)

[chipping]

YES. We can be in love and Jeff and Annie can be in love and we call all just be in ~LOVE.

I'm just so glad you liked it. My writing is kind of weird, I know, but I'm glad the Community part of it still got through.

[0penhearts]

There’s was that grin, that grin of hers that broke him a little, like a piece of this very hardly-won tough exterior was chipped away. He found himself start to spiral inward, like she was draining him of something inside of him, a bad part of him and he was becoming something a little different, a little more evolved.
Oh god, Jeff Winger, in fic and in canon, is going to KILL ME DEAD this season. I loved the way you wrote Jeff as so insecure and fragile really on the inside, while still related him back to the canon characterization at the same time. Ugh, I just want to hug him.

There was a part of him, a very real part of him, that wanted to close the divide, he couldn’t help it, just wanted to get a step or two closer to her at any given moment.
I made a lot of strange strangled gasps and flaily hand movements throughout this loveliness, and this part especially.

SO. PRETTY! :)

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Ugh, I just want to hug him.

RIGHT? My sweet Jeff Winger who is finally kind of falling in love with this person and this group of people and for once is willing to let someone through his tough shell that could crack and crumble at any given second OH JEFFREYYYYY. I love this character so much, and I love him even more so when he's with Annie, who is basically in the same sinking boat, but the two of them help each other keep their heads above water.

So glad you liked this! I will keep writing these two until my dying breathe, forever and ever.

[fangirl_101]

This is really lovely and I absolutely love how you've written Jeff. So heartfelt and sweet but some really funny bits as well. Well done!! Thanks for sharing!

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I love that Jeffrey Winger, that heart-of-gold bastard. I'm glad that the humor didn't get buried in the ~ANGST of Jeff/Annie. Glad that you liked! Thanks for reading, my dear.