Title: Stop Being a Bitch Ass Bitch Author: baeklights Recipient: modelpress Pairing/Focus: OT4 (Baekhyun/Chen) Rating: PG-13 Warnings: N/A Length: 9,896 Summary: How to make friends in prison.
you're welcome!! you are such a good author and i practically love all your chen fics (yes i read them, coz i look up to you.. i'm gross i know) and yeah! kudos to you!! :***
lzidfgbzjdfbgzdjkf i loved everything about this fic!!!! from the start, i really liked the interview format. i thought that was very unique, and i liked getting a glimpse of each character's POVs and how they developed. that was a nice touch! and it also kind of felt like a mockumentary, which was great, haha.
angry-prison-overlord-with-a-squishy-center kyungsoo is my life now. i'm just in love. (also did i spy a law abiding citizen reference lmao) and baekchen joined at the hip dick hip! how could they be so oblivious to each other i'm crying THEY'RE SO DUMB (-‸ლ) the deal with chanyeol's family definitely stabbed me in the chest a little bit and somewhat hit close to home. but i loved the alternate family that chinguline formed. that was sweet ;www
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lmao well i had considered kris for a little while but i thought maybe that's just one too many tall people so then the next logical answer was ken from vixx bc you know that looks like one hell of a motive like yeah dick2bomb 10/10 would steal condoms again. and then there was also btob's hyunsik because he kind of seems like the loyal type to me and he looks qt in a wig and idk why i feel like kyungsoo would be into that u___u
oh omg, lmao, idk why i didn't even think of kris for some reason, how odd. tbh i didnn't really have anyone particular when i wrote that in, but i briefly thought of hyunsik! XD. but hmm, idk, that ken theory is also rly good...
this is a hundred different degrees of perfect and i don't even know where to start. i would legitimately end up quoting the entire fic back to you if i tried to rehash all my favourite parts into an adequate comment. fantastic plot, engaging characters and perfect, perfect, perfect do kyungsoo!! from him calling pcy yoda, to knocking over a chair and not apologizing, and even the reason why he's in here in the first place (i'm still on the floor from that, thank you) -- all terrifically on point. i love the dynamics of the four and i enjoyed jongin's little cameos wayyyyy too much. overall, excellent fic!
the interview thing!! I LOVE IT you did a rly good job making it feel ~interactive~
kyungsoo reading the menu and glaring at interviewers!!!! jongdae giving baekhyun his marshmallows :3 chanyeol being sad over his family :( SANTA BABY bye how you make me emotions.
im so bad at commenting but i just?? i like this a lot???? great job!!!
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angry-prison-overlord-with-a-squishy-center kyungsoo is my life now. i'm just in love. (also did i spy a law abiding citizen reference lmao) and baekchen joined at the hip dick hip! how could they be so oblivious to each other i'm crying THEY'RE SO DUMB (-‸ლ) the deal with chanyeol's family definitely stabbed me in the chest a little bit and somewhat hit close to home. but i loved the alternate family that chinguline formed. that was sweet ;www ( ... )
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omg lmao. so great.
tysm for reading and commenting! i'm so glad you liked this. :)
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your icon is perfect btw
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the interview thing!! I LOVE IT you did a rly good job making it feel ~interactive~
kyungsoo reading the menu and glaring at interviewers!!!! jongdae giving baekhyun his marshmallows :3 chanyeol being sad over his family :( SANTA BABY bye
how you make me emotions.
im so bad at commenting but i just?? i like this a lot????
great job!!!
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It was interesting and funny and heartwarming.
I got fuzzy feelings after reading. Thanks for sharing. :)
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