Comments | chilliconcarne: 127.0.0.1 - Part 1 of .. 1? 2? X? Up to you!

chilliconcarne

127.0.0.1 - Part 1 of .. 1? 2? X? Up to you!

Jan 03, 2008 21:35

Well this is certainly new for me ( Read more... )

127.0.0.1

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Fascinating beginning.... ozymandiasrex January 4 2008, 19:59:32 UTC

There's just enough mystery to get me to come back for another chapter. I don't frequently say that. ;)

Re: Fascinating beginning.... chilliconcarne January 4 2008, 23:01:38 UTC

Oh no. You never say nice things to me, EVER. :-)

Re: Fascinating beginning.... ozymandiasrex January 6 2008, 19:09:49 UTC

Oh piffle! The amount of nice things I have said to you outstrip the possibility of your niceness. ;-)

dickgloucester January 4 2008, 20:48:36 UTC

Hello Chilli

I'll volunteer to do English policing. You have my email address? (PM me with yours if not) Then I'll do corrections on Word documents.

As for this, it's intriguing. Personally, I'd like a little more placing as to where it is, but I'm sure that will come.

Question: why would he "owe" it to the mysterious visitor to tell him more?

dickgloucester January 4 2008, 20:49:07 UTC

BTW, I can't promise to be quick every time, but I'll do my best.

chilliconcarne January 4 2008, 21:04:50 UTC

I'm having a bit of a hard time deciding on how much to reveal of the placing, how quickly .. as it is, in a way, relevant to things that are not to happen for some time. I can promise, though, that I do myself know of the placing - I guess that's something! Finding a ballance between being too cryptic, and having too much bad exposé, most certainly is challenging ( ... )

dickgloucester January 4 2008, 22:17:18 UTC

OK, you're on. As for plothole stuff, I'd like to do that too, but can't guarantee the time/attention, with life the way it is currently, and don't want to let you down. If I spot things as I go along, I'll tell you, but won't promise more. It would be a good idea, anyway, to have two critical readers at your beck and call.

or would fixing a chapter already online be too Orwellian?
Who cares? I regard the LJ as a more private site, with friends reading, before posting elsewhere. Change after feedback, if there's stuff that needs changing.

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