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[chikkiboo]

I need to hire a ghostwriter for fight sequences. Also it's incredibly hard to write Warhammer 40k fiction if you can't write fight scenes for shit. Also also it's hard to write 40k fiction if you can't bring yourself to write kinda purple. I feel like my lede graf in this thing I'm working on is RIDICULOUS but I might be oversensitive to

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[maxtorque]

Have you ever read any of Burroughs's Tarzan books? That man could write an awesome action scene. Might give you some inspiration. All of the early books are on Project Gutenberg, so they're free to read.

[chikkiboo]

I haven't but I shall! Seeing how people do a thing well always helps :)