Watashi no Taiyou

Apr 26, 2011 09:19

Title : Watashi no Taiyou
Pairing : Tadaiki, slight Inoobu
Rating : PG-13
Author : chii_mao_13
Summary : When will the sun stop shining? Daiki has his own opinion
Note : This is for nina-chan nikuta  who is Tadaiki biased... XD
It's failed, but feel free to read this fic ne...

“Because this taiyou wants to shine on you only. Will you accept the offer? )

rating: pg-13, type: oneshot, media: fic, pairing: tadaiki

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chii_mao_13 April 26 2011, 16:22:45 UTC
spot for nina-chan... =D

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nikuta April 27 2011, 04:12:16 UTC
LOL!!!! super thanks for this...so this is the tadaiki you were talking about ne...kyahahahaha.....so excited...
goes to read now iv-chan...
love yah...

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nikuta April 27 2011, 04:36:24 UTC
uwaaaaaaa~~~ iv-chan this is so sweet but i dunno why i'm crying yo~~~
my penguin fell to that bakaki...
and then you killed my HIKACHAN....
after that death takaki is with my daiki comforting him and he even lend his handkerchief.....

and then they go to that calming hills a very quiet place....

and kyaaaaaaaaaa why you killed YUYA kyahuhuhu..*cries*....poor daiki he is all alone but no worries....his sun was there....

“You’re still my only taiyou.” I whisper it near the grave, although I know he won’t hear me again.

At our first meeting, you were dazzling

At our confession, you became my dazzling taiyou

As we share our first kiss, you were still dazzling

At our first time together, you were still dazzling

And now, although we’re separated, you’re still my dazzling taiyou <---- my favorite!!!!!

“Ne Yuya, look. The sun above there is still shining over us. No need to worry about the light again.” I caresses his name that written there. Yeah, maybe he won’t shine on me again. He has run out of his light ( ... )

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chii_mao_13 April 27 2011, 13:47:36 UTC
Yep... it is.. XD
Glad you're happy.. =D

Actually I had a hard time wrote this, because actually I didn't have heart to kill anyone.. T^T
And now I feel guilty for killing takaki... T^T *hides in the corner*

I'm glad you like it.. it's the first time I wrote an angst, and I don't know how it turns out.. >.<
And your comment made my day too.. XD
Tadaiki = <33333 XD

CAKES!!!!!! XDDDD I want to eat cakes too!!!

Sankyuu nina-chan for loving this failed fic.. T^T

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hara_89 April 26 2011, 16:43:33 UTC
Beautifully written, ivana-chan... >.<
Even though it's bitter but it's sweet at the same time...

And you're really poetic here... gehehehehehehe... :DDDDDD
But nooo, why Yuya has to die??? Y.Y

“Maybe sometimes this taiyou will shine too bright and makes you feel disturbed. But this taiyou promise that he won’t leave you, and keep shining on you whenever and wherever you are, and tries the best to give you happiness.” I swear I see the redness of Takaki’s face, although he said it while looking at his front, refuses to look at my eyes ( ... )

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chii_mao_13 April 27 2011, 13:53:17 UTC
Sankyuu so much hara-chan!!!! >.<

Hehehehehe... Maji? >.<
I really didn't want to kill anyone here actually, but I had no choice. T^T

Kissing scene is always lovely ne.. XD
And your favorite part is my favorite part too.. >.<
Huks.... T^T

It's the first time I wrote angst, so I didn't have enough confident.. >.<
But sankyuu again hara-chan, for supporting me... X)
Glad you like this..
*hugs*

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yumechan_24 April 26 2011, 16:57:29 UTC
uwaaa...he fall in love daiki cho kawaii...
owww..stop to claim daiki as your pet, inoo and yabu cause he is my penguin...XD *whack by takaki*

this is so angst,iv-chan but i still love it...
you make me cry...T_T why you must make them seperate???? TT_TT

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chii_mao_13 April 27 2011, 13:56:21 UTC
Tadaiki is lovely ne... X3
Actually I'm the master, yume-chan.. fufufufufu *take daiki with me*

Sankyuu for loving it, yume-chan... >.<
because it's an angst, so I must make them separate... *whacked* XD

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chii_mao_13 April 27 2011, 14:00:32 UTC
Really? >.<
Thanks sumi-chan!!! ;___;

He has to go to regain his light.. >.<

LOL
Yeah... I was LOLing at that part.. XDDD

And I cried when wrote that part... T^T My God....

*blinks*
OMG.... So sweet.... *blinks*
KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!! The quote is just too sweet!!!! >.< tell your bro, it's amazing!!! your bro must be really fall in love with yu-chan ne... X3

Sankyuu again, sumi-chan!!!!

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airichan24 April 26 2011, 17:15:16 UTC
So beautiful....*sniff* Angst but beautiful...T-T
Yabu-chan and Inoochi should realize that Daiki is Yuyan-chan's penguin!! >.<
Wahh!! Hikaru and Yuya died!! T-T
Really touching...Good job Iv-chan!!

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chii_mao_13 April 27 2011, 14:03:23 UTC
Sankyuu airi-chan... >.< *cries*
Haha, yeah, you're right.. XD
I made them died here... T^T feel guilty
Sankyuu again, airi-chan!!!!

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