Comments | chii_loves_me: [One-Shot]: Not Anymore

chii_loves_me

[One-Shot]: Not Anymore

Jun 10, 2010 18:38

Title: Not Anymore (Prompt 24: 5 times Keito broke Inoo’s heart)
Author: chii_loves_me
Pairing: OkaNoo
Words: 1,109
Genre: Angst, drama
Summary: At times, Keito doubts Inoo’s sincerity. Is he really determined to keep their relationship intact?
A/N: For the OkaNoo-thon.

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type: one-shot, fic, g: hey!say! jump, fic prompt

Comments 50

crescentharpe June 10 2010, 10:45:19 UTC

/reads

chii_loves_me June 10 2010, 10:48:18 UTC

LOL NINJA!

crescentharpe June 10 2010, 12:11:52 UTC

ehehehehe

yamapiislove June 10 2010, 10:56:33 UTC

MAI! THAT WAS SUPPOSED TO BE MY SPOT! /TAKES OUT MACHINE GUN.

TUTUTUTUTUTUTUTUTUTUTU!

Thread 6

yamapiislove June 10 2010, 10:55:36 UTC

DAMN IT.
YOU--

YUKI! /whines.
WHAT. HAPPENED.

My mind is not coherent enough to figure it out.

And the song ♥ Seconhand Serenade right? :)

chii_loves_me June 11 2010, 07:16:33 UTC

yep. It never fails to make me emo. XD i love his songs. XD

Uhm, my mind wasn't coherent enough when I wrote it, soo...~ XD

crescentharpe June 10 2010, 12:14:58 UTC

WHAT THE. WHAT HAPPENED?!

did he leave? IS KEITO GONE?! wth did Inoo remember?!

i also write to my mom and dad with the へ character at the end so i guess that's correct. (unless i've been writing to them all this time and they won't even bother correcting me DX)

chii_loves_me June 11 2010, 07:18:25 UTC

Yes, he left. Yes, Keito is gone.

YAY! I'm correct! XD

crescentharpe June 11 2010, 17:44:50 UTC

b-but WHY?! i thought there would be another chance?!

:D

chii_loves_me June 12 2010, 09:45:22 UTC

maybe (this is just a theory) Keito doesn't think that Inoo deserves that chance anymore. D:

Thread 6

au_gravityfree June 10 2010, 14:13:17 UTC

see you in July my OkaNoo.

chii_loves_me June 11 2010, 07:19:22 UTC

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AU-CHAAAAAAAANN!

au_gravityfree July 6 2010, 09:27:15 UTC

i want to build a gazebo in my house ^^

I can’t believe your friends are more important to you than I am!
oh my~ i hate when someone says something like this =.=

5) so nice, but confused me in the end.
where's Keito? he's still alive? or already melted in the middle air?

chii_loves_me July 6 2010, 14:12:22 UTC

me too! Let's lure Okanoo into our homes, yes? :D

heh. I experienced it first hand. >_>

Er, this is what happens when amateurs try to write things. XD You decide yo~ :)

Thread 5

personified June 10 2010, 14:16:54 UTC

THAT WAS A ABRUPT ENDING.
I NEED MOAARRRR

chii_loves_me June 11 2010, 07:19:41 UTC

whooo~ really? XD