[FIC] In Hindsight

May 25, 2010 20:23

Title: First Try / In hindsight, he never would’ve said it that way.

Author: I think you can guess.

Genre:  Humour, assumed romance.

Characters/Pairings: Pre-established HopexLightning.

Ratings/Warnings: General, really. Just a tiny innuendo punch line.

Summary: One-shot. It wouldn’t be weird, right? It would be fine. Nothing weird.

Notes:   ( Read more... )

hope, fanfiction, final fantasy xiii, lightning

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ruinedheaven May 27 2010, 09:49:36 UTC

Lightning has a dirty mind. xD

And, so do I as I got it the first time. BWAHAHAHA!! I loved this ficlet, it was short but sweet and gut-busting hilarious. :3 I'm more interested in the fact that Light looks forward to when he turns eighteen since she all but invited him over. Seems like she has it all planned out. And, I love naive Hope. God, he could be so dense, but that's why he's so endearing. I really don't think he was even considering that line of thought when he asked her; it was a purely innocent question. Is part of the reason Light refused because she couldn't control herself? XD Fun. The idea of an aggressive Lightning is favorite of mine (coincides with the Wolf[Puma]-Light/Sheep-Hope imagery). ^^

Ahem. Right. thank you very much for this thoroughly enjoyable ficlet. It begs a sequel, I'm sure Hope would press the issue without realizing why Light is rather reluctant. Heh, I bet Snow and the rest of the group would get a good laugh out of this. I certainly did.

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chibimeringue May 27 2010, 13:12:46 UTC
XD I'm so glad you liked it! It spawned out of an idea of a series of 'firsts' for them. (Without, of course, doing anything particularly lemony, since I just can't write smut. ;;;; ) I think I may continue this when time allows. <3 Thank you for your review, as always!

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ryuakire May 30 2010, 06:53:49 UTC
Waha! That was cute! :D
I can imagine Lightning blushing over mental thoughts on the other end of the line. Poor Hope.

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chibimeringue May 31 2010, 01:21:28 UTC
xD Thank you~!
Of course, Hope abuse is the best kind of abuse. <3 Poor Lightning, too. xD

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hanarina May 31 2010, 08:51:48 UTC
Lolz. I totally got it the first time. XD Hope may be completely oblivious to these things but Light certainly isn't! Thanks for the laugh! :)

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chibimeringue May 31 2010, 20:36:25 UTC
You're welcome! I'm glad you liked it! ; u;

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farron_eclair June 3 2010, 00:18:27 UTC
HAHA..ah Lightning, great mind think alike dirrty minds that is

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chibimeringue June 3 2010, 01:35:02 UTC
PSSSH Dirty minds are the best kind LOLOLOLOL -- [/shot]

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pure_mornings June 19 2010, 03:15:56 UTC
Hahaahahaha XD excellent!!! Just how I feel about them, haha

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