Chapter 10
Author: ChibiLover14 (Jen)
Fandom: Hey! Say! JUMP
Pairing(s): TakaChii
Rating: PG (Just to be safe...)
Genre: Romance/Fluff
Notes: Heehee... I made all of you suffer in waiting for this chapter to come out. XDDD JK... I decided to post once a week. XP I'm working on chapter 11... *sigh* I'm sorta having trouble... let's just say that this
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XDDDDDD Even when he's with Takaki, Chii is still crying. I think we just discovered another trademark for him.
Bwahahaha!!! Indeed, Chinen does love being in denial. XDDD
AAAH!!! SO CUTE!!! THE FLUFF THE FLUFF!!! Takachii!!! But I still love Chiitaro more...*waits for you to upload the pics*
Pfft. Takaki wouldn't kiss Chinen on the lips because...*zips mouth*
Why do the mom's always go out? And why is it always the mom? Where's the dad? O.o;;
OMG!! MELON PAN!!!! GIMME GIMME!!! *tries to grab it*
KYAAAAAAH!!!!! FEEDING CHINEN IS JUST TOO CUTE!!!!! XDDDDDD Chii first indirect kiss. He couldn't get his actual one because...*zips mouth again*
STOP PROCRASTINATING!!!! We're gonna have to focus more on school soon no?
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I KNOW!!! GEESH!!! THAT MUST BE A TRADEMARK!!! CHINEN CRYING!!! XP For some reason... I feel that I like writing feeding people scenes... @__@;;;
Pfft. Yeah right! XP
GLAD YOU THOUGHT IT WAS CUTE ALONG WITH THE CRAPPY FLUFF!!! I love TakaYama more. XP
SSHHH!!! YOU ALREADY GAVE TOO MUCH AWAY THOUGH PEOPLE ALREADY KNOW SINCE I ALREADY POSTED UP THE LAST CHAPTER!!!
I DUNNO!!! YOU'RE WEIRD FOR ASKING QUESTIONS LIKE THIS!!! WHO KNOWS?? WHO CARES???
O__O;;; *THROWS ONE AT YOU*
Hehe... XP But I think I shall put an end of feeding scenes. I did it with Yamajima, this one, and finally TakaYama... @__@;;; Pfft...
I am... just replying to comments... *whistles* XP
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OMG!! u already post the next chapter..*freak*
i always waiting the next chapter with doki doki in my heart n guess what will happen next..
glad for chii, takaki loves him too..i loved when chi ignore anything..
and takaki feed chii..!!?? can't imagine!! *nose bleeding*
i hope u'll post the next chapter as soon as u can..
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Yush I have. XDDD
Haha and your waiting has paid off. XDDD
Yup yup! XDDD
EHHH??? A NOSEBLEED??? O___O;;; *gets a tissue*
Pfft... I replied pretty late. XP
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I know you love Chinen. *points to icon* XP
Melonpan ish a bread thingy. XP It's alright! I didn't know either until Ani bought one. XD
GLAD YOU THOUGHT IT WAS!!!
Of course! XP Haha... I replied late so the wait was quickly over. XP
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GAHAHAHAHA CANT WAIT FOR THE ENDING~!
YES, TAKAKI! CHINEN IS INDEED CUTE!!!!
GAHAHAH ANI GOT HER OWN ACCOUNT?! *FRIEND ANI*
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Heehee... TAKACHII!!! *FLAILS AROUND* XDDD
Ani already has many friends. XDDD
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Yatta--Takaki feels the same way about Chinen!! Omedetoo Chinen and Takaki!
Man, I seriously thought that Takaki was going to end up with Yamada. x]
Aww.. they're soo cute together!
Chinen’s small eyes stared at the melonpan and Takaki. In… indirect kiss??? Eek! My first kiss!!! He already felt like fainting. But… I can’t wait for my actual first kiss…
ROFL. Chinen is such an adorable kid! He's probably flailing inside about the indirect kiss. haha
Then he leaned forward and planted a light kiss on Chinen’s right cheek. The latter blushed in response, stomach feeling fluttery and heart going ‘doki doki.’ Takaki switched to Chinen’s left cheek and kissed there, too. The little boy closed his eyes, anticipating a kiss on the lips but Takaki had pulled away.
Geez, Takaki is such a tease. XDD
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Of course! This fanfic was TakaChii in the first place. XP
Oh really? I should've done that! DARN! XDDD
Yush they're cute!
Everyone flails over that though I don't mind sharing an 'indirect kiss' since it's not really one. XDDD If it was, then I would've had one with my family. XP Oh noes!
Pfft... Takaki isn't a tease. XP
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