Jack

[chiazu]

Title: Jack
Author: Chiazu
Rating: G
Characters: Hotch, Jack
Author Notes: Just a short drabble based on the episode Into The Woods, so beware spoilers. Takes place after the episode, sort of like a missing scene.

Comments

[vanessasquest]

If that's your version of craptastic, I think I'd die with fantastic. That was sweet, darling, and way better than you gave yourself credit for! *stalker-slap-on-the-wrist* So cute! ^_^

[chiazu]

Is it really that good? You're not the first person to say it's good, but I find it hard to believe. I rushed this.

[vanessasquest]

Sweets since its short and it just so happened to work out with less typoes occurring, stylistically, that part is on par to your normal writing with less errors which makes it better than what happens sometimes (I get it, I write too, you're in your head, not reading everything you type and your fingers aren't as nimble as they think and poof-- typo-fairy ENTER STAGE RIGHT!) that happened very few times in this. The concept was solid, and sweet, and answered the un-posed question of why Hotch would just pull back, so yes. Yes it is better than you thought. It's not out of par with what you normally write when you get the chance to look through for errors, so please don't feel like I'm implying this is great but your other stuff is meh... it's just normally you don't bash your stuff with the hammer of self-depreciation. ^_^ Plus, since it IS so short the focus was spot on, because there's no room to piddle around elsewise. Does that help point out why it's good

[chiazu]

Yeah, you know what, I've been way to long to really care at this point.

Thank you!! I wuv you!! *stalker huggies*

[cmali]

Love this!!! I can picture the towel cape. Adorable!!

[chiazu]

lol, Who can't picture that? Every little kid does it.