FanFic: Forever Yours (Chapter 8)

[cherrylady6]

Tegoshi sat at his table. A magazine was in front of him but he didn’t read a thing. He was thinking about Massu. Waiting for him. He promised to come by. Right when Tegoshi reached his home he called Massu and asked him to visit him. And now he was waiting. Every minute seemed to be an eternity. Finally, he heard the doorbell. He stood up

Comments

[yamapishige]

Omg~ I had to take 15 minutes before I commented.
I'M SO CRYING! RYO-CHAAN~~
The whole RyoTego is turning upside down. Now Tesshi is consoling Ryo. So cute~
Aah~ It seems like I can't stop crying.
I love the details in the fic. I have to start writing more details in my fic. I'll try it now in this next chap!
I love this fic~
Keep writing <3
-Chu-

[cherrylady6]

(Gomen for my late reply ^^)
Thanks for reading Olivia! ♥♥
I didn't intend to make you cry :/
I had to put RyoTego for some reason in this .. :>
I'm looking forard to your chap ne :O
Thank you :)
Chu Chu ~ -hugs- ♥

[laftkeichan]

“Ah, Massu, finally you picked up! So, what are you doing this evening? How about going out and eat something? What do you think?”

“Ah .. no, I’m not hungry.”

“EEEEH? Massu!? Are you ill?”
LOL was thinking the same like pi^^ heeehehehe XD

Ryo was crying quietly in his arms. He whispered “Thank you” in a low voice. Ryo was crying in Tegoshi’s arms, in the rain on a lonely bench. And although he was supposed to be sad Tegoshi felt happy.
*teary eyes* this was beautiful^^

uwaaaaa this whole chapter was beautiful^^
but i still don't know what happened with massu hehehehe XD
he's not cheating ne?? uwaaaa i'm so curious^^
heeehe everybody needs pi's help XD

thanks for the update^^
me too^^ i want a ryotego ending heehehehe XD
HUGS

[cherrylady6]

xDDD Yeah ^^ It's definitely weird when Massu isn't hungry at all ne ~
Everybody needs Pi's help xD For sure ~
I think I would go to him for help as well ^^
Not sure ~ But I feel so pity for Massu somehow :/
Losing Tegoshi in this way ~

Thanks for reading ne :)
I have to read your fic today! ~
So late ^^ -hugs- ♥

[haizul]

uwaaa~~~ T.T
ryo-chan.....
that's really sad....
the mystery is finally revealed ne.. >.<
but.. oh man, poor ryo.. T___T
he kept on smiling even though he feels sad...
thank god tegoshi was there to lend him a shoulder to cry on...

i really LOVE the ryotego hug scene!
it's just so lovely and sweet...

yay for ryotego! XD
*hugs* ♥♥♥

[cherrylady6]

Aww, Hazel-chan, thanks for reading ^-^
Hai, finally ~ poor Ryo-chan T__T
Well, I really could imagine him smiling although he is sad .. probably for Tegoshi? >__<
Thank you -hugs back- ♥♥

[marielizangela]

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[marielizangela]

I STILL CAN'T BELIEVE YOU WROTE A WHOLE PAGRAPH FOR ME. I don't even care if it was just a sentence, you wrote SO MUCH JUST FOR ME. holy crud, i feel so special right now. I don't know what i did to deserve this! haha. and you dedicated thsi chap to me. GAAAH, i don't know what to think, im like out of words. I think we've known each other for a month now ne. No, still less. omg, some people ive known at school for a year, i bet they can't even write something like this for me. i can for them, but never for me. and you wrote one for me, you have no idea how good this made me feel. like seriously.I think we have written over 100 comments for each other, im pretty sure so. haha. :DDD Sometimes I could just write 'SAME' because you write the words I wanted to write :> ME TO. i love it. hahaha. xD Im always so hyper when i read your posts. Lke that ueda post. And then the comments you leave. make me SO Much hyper. and then your fanfics, they're so much win. ME TOO. When you feel bad, I want to cheer you up. When you feel good, I want to

[marielizangela]

OMG
OMG OMG OMG
my comment got cut...
my comment is all over the place..
my comment isn't in order!
WTHEEECKKKK!
OMGOOODNESS
it got lost?
some of it?
EHHHHH!!?!?!?
im so mad right now.
OH okay, maybe it didn't get cut
just got out of order.
>.<

Okay, so the ILU TONS
thanks so much for this.
*hugs, the tightest ever, ever ever*

♥ ''xs an eternity also.

:DD bit is the last part of the whole comment.
and then where this STILL CAN'T BELIEVE YOU WROTE A WHOLE PAGRAPH FOR ME. starts is where the first comment ends. I hope you understand.
and i hope nothing did get lost.
but i think something did.
Ugh, if something did get lost im gonna get mad.
but at least all of it didn't dissapear.
Im gonna go read the chap now.
THANKS AGAIN

THANKS. ARIGATO. XIE XIE. MAHALO. SALAMAT. DANKE. KUMAO. GRACIAS. and in every language out there, thank you.

^_____^

[cherrylady6]

xDDD I replied to 2 comments but I'm already confused about them xD LJ hates us ~
I hope nothing got lost but I think it's okay ne ~
Even for cutting it I could hit LJ xD
Uwaaah, seeing you writing Thanks in many languages made me so smile ~ you're so cute, for real ~
-smiles- ♥

[marielizangela]

EYLEEEN!
i have to reply, no matter how much my mother wants me to go to bed!
hahah. :DD

So, i just finished reading the chap.
i listened to "Game of Love" the entire time.
bwahahah.

First, I LIKED THE CHAPTER
the whole rain, ryotego. uwaaah. DD:
haha,
who was massu with?
Tegoshi should have let him explain! But then if tego didn't run out there would have been no ryotego.
bwahaha.

MASSUPI.
xDDD
♥♥

awws, Tegoshi comes to Ryo.
Ahh, so thats what is wrong with Ryo.
His mother has cancer, this is so sad.
But yet he doesn't wanna go see his sis.
and tegoshi is willing to go with him!
RYOTEEGOOO.

I LOVE HOW UEDA KNOWS
RYODAAAAA, -smack-
L0l*grins*

KYAAAH
And although he was supposed to be sad Tegoshi felt happy.
DUHHHH He's in ryo's arms for goodness!
Of course he'shapppy. hehe .xDDD

Im listen to "Push On"
I actually like these songs from NEWS, hmmm :DD

THANK YOU SO MUCH AGAIN!
I CANNOT WAIT FOR THE NXT chap
i would write longer but don't wanna make my mother more mad
haha

^_______^
ilu for this!
*hugs!*

[cherrylady6]

xDDD Don't make you mother mad ne ~ not because of me ~
I don't want her to be mad at you :>

Happy you liked ~ since I wanted it to be sth special for you ~
haha yeah xD If Massu had explained properly, there wouldn't be RyoTego probably .. :>

I had to put RyoTego in it!
There was no RyoTego for such a long time xD
But it's really sad ne? Poor Ryo-chan ..

xDDDD We see RyoDa even in the little things xDDDd
-crazy- Yeah ^^ Ueda knows but Tego not haha :D

xDD I don't like Push On too much :X
I listen more to Gan Gan Ganbatte, Game of Love or Happy Birthday xD

.. Even my comment is a week later haha xD
I don't have any time to write, it's crazy ~
I want to talk to you so much but time's killing me

-hugs back- ♥

[marielizangela]

Haha, it's okay its okay. :DD

SAAANKYUUU tons again.
Why Massu arigato, cuz now Ryotego lives. hehehe.
Yeaah. DD:

RyoDaRyoDA FTWWWWW!

Ahh,
I listen to Game of Love so much now.
Gan Gan Ganbatte makes me feel good, cuz when i hear it it makes me like want to try hard!
Im listening to it right now! L0lxD

It's okay if it's late Eyleen. ;D
Time is really bad, i think about the week ahead of me and it seems like i have no time at all. DD:
Same here, i want to talk so much always!

♥♥