FanFic: Forever Yours (Chapter 6)

Sep 08, 2008 21:22

Ryo hold his breath. He knew the voice. But it couldn’t be. Everyone could be here except this person. Did he really recognize the right voice? Maybe he was mistaken and ..

“Ni - Nishikido-kun?” The voice shook a bit.

Ryo sighed. It was the person.

“Damn, Ueda, what are you doing here?”

“I can ask you the same.”

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kameda, koyashige, tegomass, nishikido ryo, fanfic, forever yours, ryotego, tegoshi yuya, ryoda

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yuyako16 September 10 2008, 09:37:04 UTC
kyaa~!!!
you've updated eyleen~!!
sugoi~!!
how i wish i could update too.
*is a failure*
TT~TT

aww~!!
wonder what happened to ryo.
why was he crying??
aww~!!
and WTH did ueda do to ryo?!
uwaa~!!!!
i don't ever want to see ryo cry.
TT~TT
that's too hard for me.

and OMGT~!!
ryo, WTH?!
why are you yelling at her?!
is she your sister??
wonder what she told ryo to make ryo that angry at her.
hmm.
*thinks hard*
i can't stop wondering what she did to ryo.
uwaa~!!

kyaa~!!!
tegomassu~!!
banzai~!! banzai~!!
ahaha.
okay, i've gone nuts.
ahaha.
but where's the ryotego??
aww~!!!
i want to see ryotego~!!
and a little tegopi.
LOLs.
ahaha.

kyaa~!!
just after reading the last word in your fic, my playlist suddenly played CODE.
and it made me laugh out loud.
ahaha. XDDD

anyways.
hope you update soon eyleen~!!
i miss you sooo much~!!
take care ne??
ilusssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssm~!!
chu~!!!

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cherrylady6 September 11 2008, 12:58:34 UTC
Mayuu! :D
Probably you have time at the week-end to update? :]
I'm looking forward to your update!
I tried hard to update xD

xDDDDD
Don't get mad at Ueda! ^^
It wasn't his fault xDDD
It's hard to imagine Ryo-chan crying hm?
He's always acting so cool ~
kyaaah ♥
.. i don't want to see anyone of them crying!
I can't take it ..
but I just don't try to imagine it :(

OmG ~
So sorry ne!
I didn't want Ryo-chan as the 'bad' man here >__He shouldn't be yelling at a girl T__T ( ... )

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v3lv3ty September 13 2008, 23:24:51 UTC
Finally i managed to read this fic till chappie 6.
Wow ♥♥ something really intense is abt to happen?

poor tesshi getting hospitalised and all because of the wrong medicine given to him, i thought it's because of the fact that he might be bleeding somewhere since he knocked himself against the table and broke the vase.

poor massu ne.. he really like tesshi.. i hope they'll get together soon since it's now exposed that it'll be ryoda *i thought the guy would be his tego-nyan but turned out to be ueda* XD but why is he crying and running away... then suddenly yelling at that poor miserable lady?

and noooooo!! you can't just stop it there.. i'm really curious to know the mystery of all those calls + ryo's real problem. can't wait for your next update cherry~ gambatte kudasai~~

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cherrylady6 September 14 2008, 15:29:16 UTC
Ah, thanks for reading then!! *-*
Something's gonna happen. I'll update later ^^

Ah sou ka! That could've been as well! I didn't think of this T__T You have good ideas :>

I really feel pity for Massu now because I like your icon and he has to suffer a lot T__T
Eh? xDD Stop Stop xDDD You think it's going to be RyoDa? Kyah ~ Actually I didn't want to write this xD
Probably an option ..
I consider this xDDD But I hope it turn out as RyoTego :)

I'm glad I could make you curious *-*
Thank you for reading ne!!
And thanks, I try to give my best ♥

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v3lv3ty September 16 2008, 14:25:54 UTC
Ho ho ho... i sure know something's gonna happen ne.
Saw that you updated chapter 7.
*zap off to read later* XDD

ahehe.. you think that's a good idea.. eh?? XDD
but my friend thinks i'm a sadist for enjoying too
much on seeing people's pain.. mou! but only for fics~

i so want to read a drabble where ryo/massu/pi pushes
tesshi away one day and he's alone in the pouring rain
got sick, fainted, didn't come home.. blah blah blah~
oh i sooo wanna read somthing like that.. XDD

but i love yours.. massu so cute~ how can he not read the medicine's label ne.. XDDD silly massu.
And i ♥ your icon! ryotego.... *_* and ueda so pretty!
yeah i pity him too.. he's always suffering when ppl
write love triangle between massu/ryo/tego ne..

*hugs massu and cherry*♥ eek... not ryoda? hmm
i'm now lost whether to root for ryotego couple
or tegomass!! arghh.. *sob sob*

well gambatte ne~~

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cherrylady6 September 18 2008, 16:42:27 UTC
xDD Well, you have time ne ^^
I hope I can update at my week-end ~

xDDDDD Maybe I'm a sadist too haha xDD
At least Ueda is one ^^
Well ^^ It's good to have ideas for fics ^^
But it's not that sadistic I think xD

Eh? xDDD You want to leave Tegoshi alone? kyaah ~
Poor Tego-chan xD
Well ~ everybody? xDD Everbody has to push him out? One after one? Maybe I can write that for you. But ~ I would feel so so pity for Tegoshi xDD

xDD Probably Massu thought about food? ^^
Gomen ne xDD When I think about Massu there's always food in my mind T__T ~
Ah, thanks :) xDD Ueda turned out really pretty. In contrast to his earlier times. He's now such a beauty ^^
xDD There are a lot of people shipping TegoMassu ne ~ but when it comes to RyoTego he always loses. >__xDD I'm currently writing a RyoDa Oneshot but I didn't plan it for this story, so ( ... )

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milachan September 25 2008, 05:26:13 UTC
Is she her imouto? I guess she is^^

Anyway....as always, very nice chapter, with lots of cute moments, but still it's becoming really sad >< But it(ll end well, I have confidence it will!!!!

And so...UEDAAAAA!!!! Ueda >< He's here, yay! I almost wished for a RyoDa back there but KameDa is good too :p In a way it's even better since I really like them both but I also like RyoDa because it's a hate=>love story...

Anyway...going for the next chapter :p

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cherrylady6 September 25 2008, 12:57:45 UTC
Kyaaah you'll find out soon dear xDDD
But good idea ^^

xDD Aww, I don't want to make you sad >__<
I try to? :) I think you want to have RyoTego ending ne? ~
Thanks ^^

xDDD He's here but he doesn't have a nice role ne ^^
xDD Ypu're the same as me darling ^^ RyoDa / KameDa. Okay, RyoDa is kinda impossible here xDD

You're crazy! xD

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milachan September 25 2008, 13:05:23 UTC
Well of course the best ending would be a Kame/Ryo/Ueda/Tego => me....

(Crazy, am I?)

But I guess I'll also be happy with a KameDa & TegoRyo (XD)....well .. let's not forget ShigeKei!!!!!!!!! And Massu can just marry MatsuJun (oO Why the hell would he do that? XD)

I just hope that at the end everyone'll be happy >< Or I'll be sad with them!

(Oh and Ueda ALWAYS has a nice role!!!! Ueda = nice) ^__^

(Really, Crazy? me? .... Why'd you say that? *innocent smile*)

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cherrylady6 September 25 2008, 19:32:44 UTC
xDD I get already confused with all the comments haha xD
who with who? xD RyoTego? KameDa? RyoDa? YuMe? RyoKame? xD
I created new pairings just now haha xD
Hai, you are crazy. But I'm too haha xD

forget about my text above xDD you wrote it xD But I'm too lazy to delete my text haha xD
Uh ~ I suck at KoyaShige xDD But yeah! They'll be happy together ^-^
xDDD Massu & Jun? OMG xDD What a pairing haha xD

aww .. I don't know ~ someone will be said ne? If TegoMassu comes together Ryo will be sad and if it's RyoTego Massu will be sad T_______T

xDDDD Not sure why I said it haha xD Just a feeling that I found someone similar to me haha xD
Gomen ne ;D But doooooon't put these puppy eyes on! I can't resist them!! -looks away- <.<
Ueda .. SUPERnice :D

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milachan September 25 2008, 19:41:47 UTC
Of course Ueda = SUPERnice ><
I'm such a blasphematorT__T Shame on me...I'll go hang myself....(I'll fool around with Tego's ghost xD)
And don't worry I'm kinda lost with all this answering too XD And you still have to answer my new comments on your old ff!!!!! .... .... .... I'm supporting you, you CAN do it!!!!! Ganbatte XD

Ah who with who? Well...all of them with me of course xD
but then.....YuMe....why not :p But not Ryo Kame >< Don't like it, don't ask me why :s I don't like that pairing so much! Well it depends on how well the story is written I gues...so u could try!

Anyway someone has to be sad >< hope it(ll be massu XD (... I'm so not nice XD....but I want Ryo to be happy so I pretty much don't really care about Massu, how horrible xD)

Lol I give you the authorization to say I'm crazy!
After all we should all have the right to speak the truth! (and also the rest xDDDD)

*puppy eyes* Please write the next chapter *puppy eyes*
*puppy eyes* *puppy eyes again*

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cherrylady6 September 29 2008, 16:42:23 UTC
You're a whut? xDDD I'm sorry but my English isn't so good xD
xDDD Well, even when you're dead you can be with Tegoshi ^^ That's sth, isn't it? xD
Your NEW comments on my OLD ff ^^ I hope you don't talk of the not-finished one xD Thanks :) Your support is amazing T__T I think when I reached your new comments I'm going to read your story first xD Gomen :D

EEH? OF COURSE NOT :D We can share xDDD But I won't give you all. Never :> Not even in your dreams wahaha xD
Why does it sound like I own them? :)YuMe .. it's a nice name ne? Yuya ~ Kame = dream ♥ Kyah xD ( ... )

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milachan September 29 2008, 17:01:23 UTC
Etoo...."blasphemator" not sure the word exists , maybe I made a mistakes :s "Heretic" if you prefer, something like I betrayed my religion ... (=Ueda) :p Arf....my story -_-" I'm kinda nervous in fact, I don't know if it's a good story, I'm pretty sure it isn't in fact XD ... -_-" Ganbatte anyway!!! Let's both meet Tesshi when we die! I mean after all he's an angel so all we have to do is make sure we'll be going to Heaven right ( ... )

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cherrylady6 October 5 2008, 15:48:39 UTC
xDD Yeah, I looked up a word and saw to blaspheme and thought of the word you used xD Gomen, I'm stupid sometimes :D
Making sure that we're going to heaven .. yeah .. xD
Is this possible? For us? :DDDD
But I really want to meet him as an angel then haha xD

And no, your story isn't bad! It was interesting. I tell you this for 5th time I think xDD gomen ^^ Gonna read on tomorrow morning or today evening :D
Eh? I can't write YuMe at all xD I don't know how they would react or treat each other xD
Tell me if you found sth xD I really can't imagine YuMe haha xD
I'm going to write one-sided RyoKame with a friend .. but the story is so complicated, I don't really know the plot myself xD

Hai Hai xDD I like Massu x Food the best haha xD
Let's see ^^

xDD Well .. somehow they had effect ne .. I wrote the chapter then ^^
And gomen xD I don't want to make you sad :(
AND DON'T DIE. DON'T EVEN THINK OF IT ^^
Aww i want to make you smile again >__< How do you do this? xD
♥♥

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