Nothing's Fair in Love and War - 6/10: Posted for Smut Sunday

Oct 05, 2008 17:53



Title: Nothing’s fair in Love and War - 6/10
Rating: NC17 for the whole thing.
Warnings/Spoilers: Set after Series 2. Slash/Language.
Characters: Torchwood Team Fic - Jack/Ianto.
Disclaimer: I do not own Torchwood or its characters.
Summary: Sequel to my fic - Sex, Lies and CCTV. Jack and Ianto deal with the end of their relationship.
A/N: Because ( Read more... )

torchwood, l&w, series, fanfic

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thrace_adams October 5 2008, 18:12:10 UTC
OMG that was hot, and angsty and dammit Ianto can you just stop thinking about all this and just go with it! Man alive you think too much!!!!!! Great chapter.

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cherry_soup888 October 5 2008, 19:22:56 UTC
I know. He really should. But he can't. Bless him. Well he can, just long enough to sleep with Jack and then his brain works again.
Thank you for reading and I LOVE your icon. Cheers hun!

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thrace_adams October 6 2008, 03:30:44 UTC
Love your icon too :) The line that really killed me...was I think it said something to the effect - this isn't a mistake it was the end - anyway...GAH that was just SO SAD!!! Please make it better...please pretty please with boys kissing on top?

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cherry_soup888 October 6 2008, 14:21:58 UTC
Lol my icon changeth regularly. I so want to lick yours but I will restrain myself...
And thanks so much, its quite angsty isn't it lol...we will see.

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missthingsplace October 5 2008, 18:21:26 UTC
That was so beautiful and so sad ...

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cherry_soup888 October 5 2008, 19:23:46 UTC
Thank you Di - and you can talk! *points at all ur current fic* :)

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missthingsplace October 5 2008, 19:54:35 UTC
Yeah ... i know ...

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cherry_soup888 October 5 2008, 20:43:12 UTC
Haha! Yes! It is true!
*is waiting patiently for your epilogue* ;)

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skullgirl013 October 5 2008, 18:28:32 UTC
I'm sorry Jenny can't talk right now, she's too buisy huddling up in a corner, crying and dying of hotness at he same time becasue of this chapter

-A few minuites later Jenny pulls herslef back together and finds it in herslef to type-

Oh Abby, wow, I'm speechless. This was just amazing! I can't think of anything more eloquent to say apart from 'wow' and 'oh my god'! So I shall have to do my faveroute thing to do in these situations, QUOTE TIME!

Jack needed him and Jack loved him and he loved Jack and this was them saying good bye. It wasn’t a mistake, it was just the endThat bit broke me! I mean I almost had to stop reading and got and cry in the corner! But I carried on and I'm so glad that I did, even if yo had me curling up and crying by the end ( ... )

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cherry_soup888 October 5 2008, 19:33:49 UTC
PH MY GOD JENNY! MAKE ME CRY ALL OVER MY LAPTOP WOMAN!

(Also please don't die, can't write without you reading...)

I LOVE QUOTE TIME! LOL. THANK YOU!

I can' tell you how much I appreciate your lovely, gorgeous (far too kind) comments. They rock my world, they are just the bt - next chapter is all for you ;)

And I wish I could make it better but there is still 4 parts left...anything could happen...

I will I promise, and your comment was done beautifully!

Thank you SO much hun.

Abby.xxx

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skullgirl013 October 6 2008, 14:38:39 UTC
Awww I'm sorry! *hands ou tissue* And I'll try not to die, but with writing like that I can't promise anything!

My comments are exactly what your amazing writiing deserves, in fact your writing deserves so much more than I can give it!

OMG! The next chapter is for me! *bush* I feel so honoured!

I forgot there were 4 parts left! Oh I can't wait and I really hope it gets better for them!

You couldn't be more welcome hunny!

Jenny
xxx

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cherry_soup888 October 6 2008, 14:49:45 UTC
Aw hun I love ya - you can totally stay.
And yes next chapter for you...so far most of the next part is turning out sad though. Sorry about that...

Hope you are having a good day love!
Thanks again, Abby.xx

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bandgeek01 October 5 2008, 18:28:57 UTC
You write not one but 2 sex scenes and then you break my heart.

Guh.

Nicole

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cherry_soup888 October 5 2008, 19:35:02 UTC
Oh my god HI there!
Sorry I disappeared last night - was a baaaad time. Anyway - THANK YOU!
And - BEST ICON EVER!
LOVE IT!

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bandgeek01 October 5 2008, 19:39:34 UTC
It's ok, I think I went and laid down not long after we stopped talking, lol.

Nicole

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bandgeek01 October 5 2008, 19:41:05 UTC
Oh and thanks, it was a bitch to create, lol. Cause the screen caps weren't square then to resize it and make sure you could still read it. Ugh.

Nicole

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morgia October 5 2008, 18:32:30 UTC
Abby,
I would like to write you in French, for explain myself most clearly, but, I hope my English will be enough. You know I always love what you wrote, but this one make me cry. I'm not the one who is gorgeous, its you. You give me the cuddles (what a wonderful word, sound so cute) that I need, you are very special person, never forget that. Your story is not just amazing, its the result of a real writer, is easy to understand you really enjoy to write and you give this pleasure at yours readers. Ma chère Abby,you have a fan and a fidel friend somewhere in Québec who are very happy right now because of you. ;)
Gros calins et big hugs
Nadine
xxxx

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cherry_soup888 October 5 2008, 19:48:59 UTC
Oh Nadine! Stop you will make me cry!
You are gorgeous and you know it, your comments always mean the world to me :)
And thank you so very, very much you are FAR too kind!
Aw hun *hugs* you are totally my beautiful friend aswell, whenever you are in England pop round (bring your brother and his boyfriend too I know you love them)
Hugs and kisses, Abby.xxx

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morgia October 5 2008, 20:02:22 UTC
lol Hoo Abby, we really need to see each other (this sentence make sense right) one day, I will show you my place and take a beer or wine on the terasse at Montréal ! I have a friend's family at Paris, so, don't know, Paris is not far away to England (well, more near than Montréal) so maybe some day... And, yes, I travel sometimes with my brother, so don't know what could happen ;)
Prends soin de toi ma belle and I'm sure everything gonna be all right(and if mad persons continue to be bad with you or life continue to be bicth I gonna take a plane and kick them ass !!!! LOL)
Bonne soirée
Nadine
xxxxx

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cherry_soup888 October 5 2008, 21:19:08 UTC
Totally Nadine!
Yes we will meet sometime...and swop writing!
It will be amazing. I hope you feel better after your career crisis and don't worry I will be fine (although it is lovely of you to say so and if I need you kick arse I will give you a ring...) :)
Good night gorgeous Nadine, take care.
xx

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