Comments | cherimola: Outlier, Chapter 10

cherimola

Outlier, Chapter 10

Apr 23, 2011 17:52

( a port in the storm )

lure, rating:nc-17, luke/reid, atwt, outlier, fan fiction

Comments 27

tldreamer April 24 2011, 02:07:49 UTC

So glad that Katie took the news so well and she's happy being his friend.

cherimola April 24 2011, 19:36:55 UTC

Thanks! I love Katie and Reid's friendship and was determined to get them there as painlessly as possible.

dpracket April 24 2011, 04:30:36 UTC

I was just wondering the other day when you would post an update to this masterpiece ( ... )

cherimola April 24 2011, 20:09:21 UTC

Hee, thanks, babe. Your skimming 'sounds' pretty thorough. ;)

I couldn't imagine Katie not being supportive. Though she might have just been relieved it wasn't a 15yo girl...

Glad I still have you intrigued! "Disconcerting" would be an understatement. The fun is playing out this scenario as realistically as possible.

Thanks as always for your wonderful comments!

biu07 April 24 2011, 05:30:41 UTC

You're back! This update is the best Easter present ever.Thank you! Update soon, please! Happy Easter! :)

cherimola April 24 2011, 20:11:20 UTC

Thanks!! I promise you won't have to wait as long for the next chapter (this time I mean it!). Happy Easter to you, too!

ltklo April 24 2011, 13:37:43 UTC

She lifted them to her chin. Her voice held wonder. “I did not think it was possible for you to get any more attractive.”

Loved this line :)

"Twin souls". Interesting concept. Great, great discussion between Reid and Katie. I thoroughly enjoyed how Katie had to drag it out of Reid, yet he desperately needed to tell her.

Reid is all sorts of confused. It's rather endearing that he feels so strongly yet doesn't know what to do with it. Great banter about not admitting to "love" yet accepting "relationship" and "romantic".

What could be more confusing than a past of physical attraction to women changing to a present of romantic attraction to a single man?

cherimola April 24 2011, 20:14:51 UTC

So perfectly put! All of it! You've always been a perceptive one. ;) Thank you!

bluemagicrose April 26 2011, 01:37:01 UTC

Thank God Reid finally told Katie. I would hate for him to just kinda drag her along while he was figuring things out. And you had me nervous that Katie wouldn't figure out it was Luke (Noah, Katie? Really? That's your first assumption?) but lol at how she found out. And I love how she's instantly accepting of Reid and wants to help him in his quest at Luke.

I like the thought of twin flame souls. I will for here on out think of Luke and Reid that way. :)

cherimola April 27 2011, 03:20:51 UTC

Heh, my beta took issue with Katie's calling Noah good-looking. But I couldn't not have her guess it was Noah -- how many gay patients can one neurosurgeon have?

As for Reid's dragging things out, when I first envisioned this story, I couldn't imagine his not immediately breaking things off with Katie the minute he realized he had feelings for Luke. All part of his integrity and need for order.

And glad you liked the twin souls. Soulmates are so 2007. ;)

Thanks, as always, for your comment! I'll be sure to post the next chapter before I head back to the Middle East. :)

bluemagicrose April 27 2011, 06:33:29 UTC

You're going back to the Middle East? Where? Girl, be safe. Fingers crossed for a safe trip and travel to and from.

cherimola April 27 2011, 18:39:22 UTC

Thanks, luv. I'll be in relatively safe Jordan again, this time for six weeks. I'll be sure to guard my laptop with my life. ;)