Comments | cherimola: Outlier, Chapter 2

cherimola

Outlier, Chapter 2

Jan 09, 2011 14:36

( Reid thinks he's ready. Cherimola chuckles )

lure, luke/reid, atwt, outlier, fan fiction

Comments 40

rolsfan January 10 2011, 04:14:56 UTC

Some of my favorite stories are the ones that are take-offs from what happened on the show. This is awesome. I love how Reid can't stand to see Luke so sad, but then says exactly the wrong thing. I really feel bad for Luke in this story. I can't wait to see what happens next.

cherimola January 10 2011, 22:48:13 UTC

Thanks so much! I'll be playing around with a few more scenes. And by "playing around" I mean subverting them to my will. ;)

murgy31 January 10 2011, 05:50:49 UTC

Yay! Yay! Yay!

cherimola January 10 2011, 22:48:55 UTC

You liked? ;)

shar_jere January 10 2011, 14:08:20 UTC

Talk about intense... someone is definitely having a bad day!

cherimola January 10 2011, 22:49:16 UTC

I'll make it up to them. ;)

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cherimola January 11 2011, 21:13:35 UTC

Once again, you've made my day. <3

As for the rest...stay tuned. ;)

joann414 January 12 2011, 00:59:16 UTC

This is so much better with your add ins. Reid being insecure, and Luke's anger taking place of his crying. I love the way you wrote that. It was like Reid could bring out stronger emotions in Luke than Noah could. Great.

cherimola January 12 2011, 02:03:46 UTC

So beautifully put! And so very, very true. :)