Comments | cherimola: Outlier, Chapter 2

cherimola

Outlier, Chapter 2

Jan 09, 2011 14:36

( Reid thinks he's ready. Cherimola chuckles )

lure, luke/reid, atwt, outlier, fan fiction

Comments 40

alissablue January 9 2011, 23:41:43 UTC

I just continue to be in awe of your writing.

This was so intense and such an amazing read.

Poor Luke, though :(.

cherimola January 10 2011, 22:41:02 UTC

Aww, thanks! I know, poor Luke. But I'll take care of him, no worries. ;)

ltklo January 10 2011, 00:13:04 UTC

Love the descriptions of all the details that Reid notices about Luke.

His hands rose to grip Luke’s biceps, his body tilted forward, feet spread, right foot planted on…one of the un-tidied toys. A teddy bear.
Loved the detail!

cherimola January 10 2011, 22:44:06 UTC

Thanks! Couldn't resist. I've never met a moment I haven't wanted to imbue with subtext...

im_with_him84 January 10 2011, 01:38:42 UTC

Love this so much.
Your writing is just wonderful, the way the story just moves along so smoothly and beautiful. Really looking forward to the next chapter!!

cherimola January 10 2011, 22:45:10 UTC

Thanks! So great to 'see' you again! I'll try not to disappoint. :)

marsabi January 10 2011, 01:40:54 UTC

Nice version of that scene ,and it crackled with tension! I enjoyed Reid's thoughts

cherimola January 10 2011, 22:46:16 UTC

Glad you liked it, thanks! I always wanted Luke to be more upset in that scene.

bluemagicrose January 10 2011, 02:46:59 UTC

Yes, I too and so interested in what's going on between Katie and Reid.

I like your take on the scene better then what we got on the show. MUCH better.

cherimola January 10 2011, 22:46:46 UTC

Aww, what a fabulous compliment! <3