Outlier, Chapter 2

[cherimola]

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[gradgirl_07]

Love all the scientific counting, just because it reminds me of you. ;-)

Great take on this scene and I think my fav. part was that patch of Luke's neck. And yes his hair was too long!

Another outstanding chapter, bb.

[cherimola]

Just wait until Reid starts making a spreadsheet. ;)

[gradgirl_07]

Ahaha!

[slayerkitty]

Wow. I like how you mixed it up a little here. Also, Reid standing on the porch too afraid to ring the bell had me cracking up.

Poor Luke. He's having a bad day.

[cherimola]

Thanks - I enjoy perverting canon so as to do my bidding. I'll never be as good at it as you, though. <3 And yes, I did feel a bit bad making Luke's day so bad. At least Reid was helpful!

[slayerkitty]

Heh, I'm not that great at it. I just take a really a great pleasure in 'fixing' all of ATWT's 'wrongs'. :D

[cherimola]

And God bless you for it.

[jem_018]

Holy Shit. Way intense chapter. Oh goodness. My poor heart.

Reid standing at the porch too afraid to knock had me laughing. Haha. :P

And to Katie - she wouldn’t be his usual hit-and-run or convenient arrangement. He’d made a commitment to connection, to learning from each other. To seeing where things could go.
Huh. Say what?! Oh goodness. Here I go again.

“Is this a stick-up?”
*snorts*

Oh gosh. Luke was having a bad day and Reid just kept going on and on.

The manhandling. Oh my...

[cherimola]

Sorry about your heart. ;) I should probably try to stop giving everyone such bad days.

[f3d0ra_girl]

Oh reid. Oh luke.

[cherimola]

I know, poor babies. It'll get better for them. ;)

[rehabbed]

Omg, so intrigued by this Katie business!

My brain kinda melted after Luke started manhandling Reid, though. UNF.

I'm loving this story.

[cherimola]

Aww, thanks! Glad you're still intrigued. ;) Next chapter should clear some things up...