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#539: Look On Up

Sep 15, 2016 00:18

Prompt: #539
Title: Look On Up
Pairing: Jongdae/Sehun, Jongdae-centric
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: strong language, mentions of alcohol usage, occasional capslock, heavy bias towards FC Bayern Munich
Word count: ~47.4k
Summary: After arrogant football player Kim Jongdae transfers on loan to the football club of his dreams, FC Bayern Munich, he expects ( Read more... )

4: chen's birthday 2016, pairing: chen/sehun, rating: pg-13

Comments 8

girlglow September 16 2016, 00:40:49 UTC

I remember seeing this prompt in the prompt archive, and it was one of my favorite prompts to take note of. By the way, this 47k fic is DEFINITELY worth the read and is movingly beautiful. Dear Author, I really love your writing style and you write so beautifully (teach me Senpai :3) I loved how you used actual football teams (I'm clueless when it comes to sports) and you seem very knowledgable about football! I love how the emotions fit the plot perfectly, also Jongdae and Sehun's characterization plus their developing relationship progressed beautifully. Reading this fic made want to learn more about football, and the way you detailed the games and scenes was amazingly done! Words cannot describe how lovely this fic is, so I will just spazz at my favorite scenes that I enjoyed/cried/laughed/died, I apologize in advance for my incoherence ( ... )

anonymous September 16 2016, 04:06:00 UTC

WHAT DO YOU MEAN A SECHEN AND THE GREATEST AWESOMEST BAYERN MUNCHEN FC. WILL DEFINITELY READ THIS LATER

kiki_bw September 16 2016, 04:06:23 UTC

im crying this was so wonderful to read😭😭
im craving a sports anime after jongdae now!
i love it
i love love love love love it to bits
thank you so much for writing this!!

shanwens September 17 2016, 03:44:53 UTC

i remember vaguely seeing this prompt and thinking it was a cute idea but i feel like you went way above and beyond the initial idea and this was rly nice to read :') i read this in one sitting from like. 2 am to 4 am which was probably not a good idea bc i kept thinking abt the fic and i couldnt fall asleep lmao ( ... )

bianca747 September 18 2016, 20:38:16 UTC

This was soooo good. You combined some of my favourite things aka EXO and football though I'm more of a Premier League follower. And now I maybe know bit more about Bundesliga, or Bayern at least ( ... )