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chase65

TFATF Fic - Contact 4b/4b v.2

Apr 11, 2006 12:32

A/N: This version is fairly identical to the first until the last half or so. If you’ve read the other version and want to skip to the difference scroll down to where it says variation starts

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Brian thought it might be German that he heard as he approached the living room, but he couldn’t be sure. Standing on the threshold of the room ( Read more... )

fandom:tfatf, fic: slash, fic:dom/brian

Comments 9

Version 2 cont.. chase65 April 11 2006, 21:01:07 UTC

“Is that where ( ... )

End of Version 2 chase65 April 11 2006, 21:02:42 UTC

It had been Dom’s idea to have breakfast at the hotel in town, complete with stupid disguises ( ... )

End of Version 2 chase65 April 11 2006, 21:04:02 UTC

And then Brian’s body tensed, let go and his knees buckled. Dom tightened his arm around Brian’s waist ( ... )

Re: End of Version 2 meganlala February 12 2010, 16:50:43 UTC

Oh my lord! V2 was awesome (that should be underline, in bold italic).
Please please please post the sequel.
I'm going to go look just in case you have.
But please please please write more.
Love the way you write this pairing.
The way they relate to one another sends that spiraling sinking feeling of emotional warmness through my stomach.
Thanks heaps!

Re: End of Version 2 chase65 February 24 2010, 18:33:36 UTC

I love that feeling in the stomach when I read fic and I am thrilled that I was able to create that in someone else. Thank you so much for reading. I have posted the sequel. It's here

http://chase65.livejournal.com/16677.html#cutid1

in case you hadn't found it. It's Untitled. I hope you like it. Thank you very much for reading and taking the time to leave feedback.

Contact anonymous April 13 2006, 02:41:46 UTC

This is excellent. Very much worth the wait. You didn't make it easy for them. I was surprised that they didn't end up together though. I love to see them together, forever, but your 'teaser' at the end is very interesting. 'He Knew Men' is great too. I really like your writing, I hope you'll continue. Thanks.

Re: Contact chase65 April 13 2006, 17:18:02 UTC

Thanks so much, it turned out to be more difficult than I thought it would be, hence the three versions. I do think of them as together, but the logistics are just difficult at the moment. And even though the teaser might suggest otherwise, well...I don't want to give anything away.

I'm glad you were still interested after all this time.

Although, there is more coming I have learned not to promise when exactly until the fic is actually finished. So as they say 'watch this space.'

Cheers

aislinnrae January 10 2007, 04:04:53 UTC

*sigh* Can I just say I love you? Apart from select TFaTF fics, I can't find much Dom/Brian material that is worth reading. Every time I get the urge (ever since after I watched TFaTF for the first time then went looking for slash and stumbled upon Maygra's work) I scour the net in hopes of finding something good, something well written, with plot, depth, maybe a little smut (shock, horror), and a lot of Dom/Brian interaction, and never find anything. Maybe once or twice I manage. I hadn't read this when I found it, I went to the Spike/Xan fic, cause it was late and I was tired *rolls eyes*, and this seemed long, but that other comment I left you today reminded me I hadn't read this yet so I decided to now. That's why I feel so strongly about pledging my deep and unwavering love to you =P : this is excellent. It's positively squee-worthy. Amazing, really, and you have to write a follow up, a sequel, another ending, whatever, I don't care, you just have to write something in this universe... Or y'know, just write more Dom/Brian fic. ( ... )

Squee! chase65 January 19 2007, 04:30:40 UTC

Maygra, yeah. I think her slash might have been the first TFATF I read. And yes, you may love me. And I will love you right back, your comments made me squee and were so very welcome after a day of very non-creative paper pushing at work. I read your comments the night you posted and ended up re-reading this part of the fic to get me going for ( ... )