Comments | charmed8620: Of Rings and Roses

charmed8620

Of Rings and Roses

Nov 30, 2011 19:19

( So this is my first BSG fic ever. It was inspired by watching 'Sacrifice' again with my friend who is watching the show for the first time. It's also the first fic I've actually sat down to write (instead of just thinking about writing) in a very long time. It was written in an afternoon and as my first fic back it hasn't been beta-read by anyone, so you've been warned. I'd love any feedback (positive or constructive criticism) that you have to offer! )

fic, billy, bsg, laura

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hobbit_kate February 25 2012, 15:00:01 UTC

Nnghgn... Sad puppies!

Poor Laura, and poor Billy. Your Billy's as adorable as the real thing :). You convey Laura's grief and her shock at seeing Lee/Dee very well . I also liked how you link the situation back to Adar for a moment.

charmed8620 February 25 2012, 20:15:40 UTC

Thanks for commenting! Billy is just such an adorable character...I'm happy you got that from my story as well! I don't know what it is about the Adar relationship, but for some reason I feel like it's something Laura reflected on quite a bit after the attacks and I have to wonder how she would have felt about it in light of the Lee/Dee relationship (I'd kind of love to know Mary's thoughts on the issue, hehe)