[Fic] Bells of Nagasaki

Aug 16, 2011 14:48

- I must say after editing this and re-writing some parts, I am quite fond of this fic; it has everything I'd always wanted to explore - history and relationships, and Giripan ♥ I hope you will enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it :')

!kinkmeme, !char: japan, !char: greece, !pairing: japan/greece, !verse: canon, !char: corporal cat, !char: italy (north), !fanfiction, !oneshot, !pairing: greece/japan, !fandom: axis powers hetalia

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rosetteroulette August 16 2011, 09:05:36 UTC
This was heartfelt and beautiful. You've gotten them down perfectly.

I loved the addition of Dr. Takashi in there. It adds even more to the emotion.

Gah, I just really loved this. ♥

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charlzway August 16 2011, 09:25:01 UTC
I felt it was necessary to mention Dr Nagai, especially when his own personal story is already very touching on its own, so I'm glad I was able to tie it into the fic as well, and juxtapose his relationship with Midori (even if only a little) against Greece and Japan's own ties to each other.

Thank you for the comments, it makes me happy to know you enjoyed it :)

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shibbyone August 16 2011, 14:33:55 UTC
I don't think there are words to adequately describe how beautiful this was. All the historical details, the way their relationship changed throughout the years... oh it was just lovely. I'm actually in the middle of writing a reunion ficlet myself (unrelated to the kink meme, I have no idea how I missed that prompt!) and this just throws mine into the dust. ♥

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charlzway August 16 2011, 15:13:42 UTC
Oh wow, your comment just made me go asdfjdfdlgkh I don't know what to say except that I'm rather embarrassed now. I really wanted to show the little things about their relationship and their feelings throughout each scene and so I'm happy you liked it.

It was one of the earlier prompts (Part 5 I think) and the original request was actually just "Greece/Japan reunion sex after WWII" lol. Somehow this fic ran way with me and just.. wrote itself out? Aww I'm sure yours will be just as wonderful. Which characters' reunion will you write for? UKUS?

Thank you so for the comments <3

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shibbyone August 16 2011, 16:36:07 UTC
I'm in the middle of writing a Greece/Japan post-WWII reunion fic bahahaha

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charlzway August 17 2011, 01:20:27 UTC
Oh! Well, the more fics the merrier lol. Looking forward to read it :)

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rose_fortress August 16 2011, 15:09:22 UTC
The added scene really does give the fic a more complete feel and you managed to sneak a little bit of smut in there too. I did love the style you wrote this fic in (even if you said that it was hard for you to write in), and the scene with Dr. Takashi and his wife was just lovely. ♥

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charlzway August 16 2011, 15:22:35 UTC
Yes, it really does feel a bit more "tied-together" now, so to speak I am somewhat ashamed to say that I woke up with that little smut scene writing itself out in my mind. Captcha and my muses demand teh smut lol.

I loved that scene too. It made me sad reading about his story, so that is my tribute to them, in some small way as odd as it sounds.

And thank you again for the comments, on the kinkmeme and over here <3

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fireblazie August 16 2011, 17:27:00 UTC
Oh, I've literally got goosebumps right now. This was beautiful, as others have said. I have nothing more to say; it is what it is ♥

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charlzway August 17 2011, 01:21:59 UTC
I'm glad that you enjoyed it :')

Thank you for the comments <3

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lastxsentence August 17 2011, 02:58:42 UTC
OH MY ZEUS!!!
It was Beautiful, amazing...! I LOVE IT!!!!
I'm a big fan of Greece's history and Giripan <3 so.. It's nice to find a fic that mixes both things *---*

Efharisto for this piece of art!

<3

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charlzway August 17 2011, 12:10:09 UTC
I love Greece and his culture and history too, as much as Japan's, which is why I decided this fic should be told from his POV Greece needs some spotlight, at times and I love writing him so much!

Heee I'm so happy you love it, I really love this fic too. And eíste ef̱prósdektoi~!

Also also, I love your icon! So pretty! *A*

Thank you for commenting <3

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