Comments | charisma: Why I don't write in forms...

charisma

Feb 17, 2006 17:26

...my very bad attempt at a sonnet, haha...

( It's so bad, it needs a cut... )

Comments 2

jonnyquest72 February 18 2006, 11:27:36 UTC

It's a pretty sonnet! What's the problem?

charisma February 19 2006, 03:57:29 UTC

The rhyme and the meter are kinda off...