Comments | changeful: [ fic ] tell me that you'll miss me

changeful

[ fic ] tell me that you'll miss me

Jan 17, 2014 02:20

B1A4 | cnu/sandeul | PG-13 | 3,500 w

dongwoo comes and goes. junghwan can't wait forever.

( he feels warm and alive, even though he knows this is usually the beginning of a downward stumble. )

b1a4, b1a4: sandeul, prompts, b1a4: cnu, 50 b1a4 fic challenge

Comments 9

xstarlesscity January 17 2014, 08:37:26 UTC

WHY

xstarlesscity January 17 2014, 08:50:37 UTC

JUST KIDDING I'M OBSESSED WITH THIS

changeful January 18 2014, 02:08:31 UTC

♥

fourcoldpaws January 17 2014, 22:04:52 UTC

this is so nice u____u so well-structured & well-put & well-detailed & well-everything. you paint their emotions so nicely, and let them say such nice, meaningful things. it's also a great take on the prompt that you don't see a lot. it's funny bec when i first read the wip drafts you posted, there was a lot of things i didn't think about, but now that i know the theme, i spot all these little details that guide the reader... maybe i'm overdoing it bec he must have been fairly human-passing to be able to hang out with junghwan for such a long time, but i think about him sitting in the back of the dark store and watching the rays of sun shining in through the windows, just outside the range of them. and i'm also picturing him very sneakily pouring out the coffee junghwan brings or at least getting around drinking it somehow. the store that has been sitting there for maybe a century, and maybe dongwoo has been sitting there for that century too. that he doesn't care much for material things, but likes inconspicuous little everyday ( ... )

changeful January 18 2014, 02:13:42 UTC

i'm really glad you liked it T ^ T i was feeling so weird about this piece as i wrote it because i wanted to write it in a way that it wouldn't have to read as a supernatural au while playing with the theme of having once been human and a limited capacity for change and just things not working (bc i am a sucker for things not working. or working without really working idk). but at the same time the further along i got the more i worried that the vampire twist (not even mentioned in the actual body of the thing) would ruin what was built up. but ugh i'm just so glad, tysm ♥

IT IS GOING TO HAPPEN. even if i have to physically rip it out of my body damnit. that's the part where i get to be gross. i've been looking forward to it since i started this.

sai12 January 18 2014, 03:58:08 UTC

Well, vampires eh? That comes as a surprise but after seeing that I can kind of see hints to it in the story. I'm squinting for you okay? lol

This was cute in a really really sad way. I just wanted to punch cnu most of the time so there's that I guess.....

changeful January 18 2014, 17:39:00 UTC

i tried to be subtle...too subtle? idk lol.

good to know...when/if i post the companion piece you'll probably want to punch baro most of the time u_u

xstarlesscity October 21 2014, 14:32:04 UTC

so rereading and i think i never read the note at the bottom..... DONGWOO IS A FUCKING VAMPIRE?????????? YOU HAD THAT IN MIND WHEN YOU WROTE THIS?????????????????????? THIS CHANGES EVERYTHING

OR MAYBE IT DOESN'T

I WANNA CRY A LOT MORE NOW I THINK

geewizkhalifa October 24 2014, 20:57:55 UTC

this fic is so beautiful aufgffhghg you characterised them soo well im upset;;;