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[chamilt6]

John Mayer- "Stop this train"

The sun has yet to rise and Serena is sitting on the shore of Cala Santanyi.  They are due to return in two days time.  She's feeling anxious about the impending storm that awaits her back in New York. The serpent that rules Runway with an iron fist wrapped in haute couture is bound to find out if she isn't already

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[pure_ecstasy6]

this is interesting..can't wait to read more! =)

[meli_melo_meryl]

I can't wait to read more! This is great!

[pandora_007]

Gosh.. this is torturing me.. but i cant stop read..

just a little tiny add.. you should put mais not mas, mas means but and mais means more.. :-)

and yes.. Brazilians do it better.. but i still want Miranda to get Andy back..lol

[chamilt6]

Perhaps I should have explained that better. I kind of switched from Portuguese to Spanish so that Andy would understand want serena wanted. (the whole incoherent tidbit)... But i will make the change that way it's not confusing. Thanks pandora.

[jintymac]

You really have gone somewhere I didn't expect with this story but I still love it ;-)

Can't wait to read more!