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[chamilt6]

John Mayer- "Stop this train"

The sun has yet to rise and Serena is sitting on the shore of Cala Santanyi.  They are due to return in two days time.  She's feeling anxious about the impending storm that awaits her back in New York. The serpent that rules Runway with an iron fist wrapped in haute couture is bound to find out if she isn't already

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[androgynydelmar]

Ohhhh, she finally gave in to Serena.. I'm a huge Mirandy shipper, but I have to admit that this is a nice pairing too.. And after seeing little glimpses of how "not-right" their other relationships have been, I'm suddenly finding myself cheering for them, hoping that they may at least find some happiness with each other. I can't wait to see how this works out :D

[blackgrl71]

utterly, utterly, fantastic! this just drives up the 'tension' and potential 'conflict' that much more.

[spatialanomaly]

Cool story! I want to say I want Andy to be happy and content with Serena, but I'd be lying...I'm rooting for Miranda all the way. I like your attempts at incorporating phrases and references to Spanish and Portuguese. It gives the story some realism. Well done.

Just one tiny thing. I told myself I'd just ignore it, but I can't because it's a reference to one of my favorite poets. When you wrote out the lyrics to "ya vienen llegando" you wrote "y un libro de martin" It's in fact "un libro de Marti" as in Jose Marti the Cuban poet/patriot. The whole song is about Cubans fleeing the island and finding liberty.

One of Marti's Versos Sencillos talks about suspected adultery and ends with the narrator saying "I don't know how or when, but I know you cried the whole night for me" or something like that. :D

Anywho, really great story there. I'm enjoying it!

THANK YOU THANK YOU

[chamilt6]

Cool. See- I thought of it as a reference to a book (pretty famous)I read by Jose de San Martin (Argentine) referencing liberation and patriotism. Then when I looked up the lyrics it says de Martin on the net. Through me off. (slams head on the desk LOL). I will definitely look into him now. Gracias a ti. As far as the references to Spain...well I have spent quite a lot of time there and I plan to move back. I could have went on and on LOL...and a few friends from Brazil.

I'm rambling LOL.

Re: THANK YOU THANK YOU

[spatialanomaly]

De nada, un placer de introducir a otra persona a las obras de Marti. :)

Spain seems like a gorgeous place to visit judging from the pictures I've seen. I'd like to make the trip someday. Very vibrant culture, and wonderful food. I grew up eating caldo gallego...but I bet it tastes even better in Spain.

Ramble on, you have a good story on your hands. I can't wait for more.

[whitelder]

it is going to be Mirandy right? I never read Serena/Andy stuff cause Serena should be with Emily.