Catch

Jul 29, 2007 20:01

Title: Catch
Series: Finding
Sub-Series: Firefly 100 series that picks up after Jayne and River are together. Follows Move.
Rating: PG 
Word Count: 400
Spoilers: Post-BDM
Characters: Jayne, Mal, Zoe, Simon, River, mentions of an OC child.
Disclaimer: Firefly owns me, I own words
Notes: Follows Move . As always
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jayne, simon, zoe, firefly 100, river, mal

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fabledfigment August 1 2007, 05:06:40 UTC
I like that he talks himself down and someone, Zoe? Builds him back up. He isn't just a merc anymore. He's family.

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ceslas August 1 2007, 05:22:56 UTC
I do like how Jayne is still uncertain about his place; I have a feeling that he always will, just a part of his fiber, the being an outsider even in the midst of family. There is a part of him that feels not truly worthy I think.

Suppose I ought to have posted a color chart? >;0)

Jayne is the base color (d'uh- me, not you!)
Simon is blue
Zoe is red
Mal is green
River is black

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razycrandomgirl August 1 2007, 06:03:26 UTC
The Alliance are scum!

Poor Zoe. every body's got babies sept for her. And she wanted them the most. -sigh-

Oh Jayne. He's got some luck. I'm not really figuring out the nature of said "luck" but he's definitely got some. :-D

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ceslas August 1 2007, 06:07:54 UTC
Oh Jayne. He's got some luck. I'm not really figuring out the nature of said "luck" but he's definitely got some.

*Huggling myself and laughing out loud!!!* You are brilliant darlin'! Brilliant.

And bless Zoe, as referenced in your icon- she must put up with the most inane comments by ostensibly intelligent people.

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razycrandomgirl August 1 2007, 06:31:50 UTC
Speaking of icons I love the way she looks at Jayen in yours. And then in the scene she like closes her eyes and her expression's like "OMG is he serious?!"

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ceslas August 1 2007, 06:37:20 UTC
Fair certain Zoe has that thought about Jayne in many contexts!

"OMG is he serious!" *He just had a total meltdown in a saloon.

"OMG Is he serious?" *He is going to marry River!

"OMG Is he serious?" Oh SHHHIIITTTEEE! Mal is getting pummelled.

"OMG Is he serious?" He thinks I would be a good babysitter!

You see what I am getting at...

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ever_obsessed August 2 2007, 06:22:25 UTC
The Alliance really don't get 'personal space,' do they?

*spends way too much time thinking about the harvesting*

I blame you, ahem.

Also, I want to hug Zoe so bad, you have no idea - she wants a baby so bad, *wonders absently where the knife in her heart came from*

Oh, right, you're good at that.

Poor Jayne, though, he's got enough on his plate at the moment.

As I said before, I don't want his head to explode.

It looks so cute in a hat of cunning.

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ceslas August 2 2007, 06:52:55 UTC
The Alliance really don't get 'personal space,' do they?

Ummm...no?

*spends way too much time thinking about the harvesting*

Well, I imagine it wasn't all that entertaining, given as how he doesn't remember it...

I blame you, ahem.

And I blame the Muse, but boy do I love her to itty little bits. *Happy she talks to me at all!*

*wonders absently where the knife in her heart came from*

*Puts hand up guiltily* Is that even a word?
-^0 0^0 -^0

Oh, right, you're good at that.

*Buffs fingernails on shoulder* Thank you... You know you spur me on right? I am in love with your comments and how Termination makes me go Whoaaaaa....

Poor Jayne, though, he's got enough on his plate at the moment.

As I said before, I don't want his head to explode.Yeah, the next bigger piece takes a step back and wraps up two other thoughts... the Fifth No (And then they'll be done!!!Woo-hoo!) and a follow-up to Jayne Dancing.... trust me, it will be ok, even if it seems like it might not. One reason the written out-of-order chronolgy works for me is ( ... )

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ever_obsessed August 2 2007, 08:31:05 UTC
I am in love with your comments and how Termination makes me go Whoaaaaa....

Hee, *blushes madly*

Best comment I ever got?

That my feedback was as good as my fic, *bounces a bit*

I try very hard to give good feedback, and your stuff is so made of awesome that it's easy!

*Cheered that Missy made it by... whistles innocently and mischieviously....*

Dude - sixteen kids, one Chuckie Cheese, and only two adults.

I'm still recovering from the horror of it all, ;-)

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ceslas August 2 2007, 14:52:59 UTC
That my feedback was as good as my fic, *bounces a bit*

It would really depend on who wrote that now wouldn't ??? .;0) Heee...I can actually think of a few on my flist who make me bounce... Not sayin' yer one of them, not sayin' yer not >;)

Dude - sixteen kids, one Chuckie Cheese, and only two adults.

I'm still recovering from the horror of it all, ;-)

Are you INSANE!!!! Wait, don't answer that... you have a kid, already qualifies you for that moniker...

I try very hard to give good feedback, and your stuff is so made of awesome that it's easy!

I must tell you not only does Termination make my brain work, your comments have made me more aware of commenting more incisively myself... Thanks!

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