Catch

Jul 29, 2007 20:01

Title: Catch
Series: Finding
Sub-Series: Firefly 100 series that picks up after Jayne and River are together. Follows Move.
Rating: PG 
Word Count: 400
Spoilers: Post-BDM
Characters: Jayne, Mal, Zoe, Simon, River, mentions of an OC child.
Disclaimer: Firefly owns me, I own words
Notes: Follows Move . As always
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ceslas July 31 2007, 15:01:30 UTC
Thank you! The Alliance struck me as the most invasive of employers, especially for folks anywhere near the Academy. May have been twenty years ago, but they were still creepy then.

Zoe is the soul of common sense, no matter her grief or sorrow, she would see the clearest path I figured.

Simon is a professional, he can see what needs to be seen when he allows himself.

Ayuh, almost done with the follow-up... It may not be what is exected, but then, when is it ever? Kinda like plans that run smooth; they just go bendy somewhere along the way...

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bookaddict43 July 31 2007, 12:10:19 UTC
The Alliance get more and more invasive don't they? Harvesting sperm? ewwwwww

I like the analytical way Zoe asks the questions and how Simon is very non-judgemental. I think the little guy is going to end up on the ship somehow and then River and Jayne are in for some interesting times :)

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ceslas July 31 2007, 15:04:58 UTC
Yup, the Alliance is just mega-corp of creepiness... such is a large corp...

Interesting may not mean what we all think it means >;0) He will be a tough addition to the violent duo... I don't envy him that.

*Hugs* Zoe if she would let me. That woman makes my heart happy even in her dryness.

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silentpheonix July 31 2007, 14:36:11 UTC
*wild flailing* River and Jayne's got a kid! Don't worry Jayne, if you can't convince Mal to let you keep the kid on board, Zoe sure as hell will. :D

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ceslas July 31 2007, 15:08:18 UTC
I'm thinking that Jayne will be the one needing the convincing! He is not a man who looks to be a parent no matter the means. But Zoe is definitely the one who will keep Mal in line. Course, it may help if I told everyone what has been going on with the rest of the crew during the Jayne and River series... >;0) (did you happen to notice Mal's comment about 'the others') *Nods*

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icebreather July 31 2007, 21:38:54 UTC
I had fun pinning down who had what lines. At first I was going, "where's River?" but then I found her.

I think I figured everyone else out, too! This is very nice and rather exciting.

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ceslas August 1 2007, 02:58:39 UTC
*Big Grin* I had a good time trying to figure out how to make each person clear. I didn't want to use space with identifiers, but it still needed to be clarified somehow.

Thank you for thinking it worked. *Phew*

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rosehaft August 1 2007, 00:08:32 UTC
Wouldn't a little boy perk up the merc and crew? Jayne could hang the swing next to his weight set.

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ceslas August 1 2007, 03:01:45 UTC
Well, it might in another AU, but this version has had it's share of hardness in it... I hope it will fit in to what is already there... Thank you for supporting the idea of cheering the crew somehow though!

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