100 Words

[ceslas]

Title: Conversation
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Post-BDM, after Five No's
Characters: Mal, Zoe about Jayne/River
Disclaimer: Firefly owns me, I own words
Notes: 100 words that snuck up sideways...
All Jayne/River stories are in the same storyline...

“Been noticing our mercenary seems to be visiting Doc a fair bit more often than he used to.”

“Yes sir, been

Comments

[razycrandomgirl]

I just tried to google "Tross’s wrath" but then I got it. lol

nice back and forth. -thumbs up-

[ceslas]

Teehee... Mal can get all cryptical like can't he? >;0)

They just were talkin', and Mal thought he oughta check in with Zoe about things...

[razycrandomgirl]

-snicker- oh Mal. I still love him. Always will. :-)

[ceslas]

Depends on who ya ask here...could be a little creepifyin' fer some a' us >;)

[ceslas]

Everyone should listen to Zoe more often. She doesn't say much, but she speaks volumes!

*Happy dance* I love seeing Jayne from other perspectives too...will be seeing more from Simon soon I expect...

[ceslas]

Excellent! Cause I liked writing it alot!

[bookaddict43]

Love the Zoe's comments especially the last one! I also love the look at the developing relationship from someone else's perspective...

[ceslas]

Zoe is so hard so it is a great feeling when her voice sounds right. I often sense her looking at me with that slightly raised brow just waiting for me to figure it out. *Head desk*

[crazywriterchic]

*giggle*

Very nice.

[ceslas]

*Giggle* in reply... They are a fun two to write- old friends indeed.