Third No

Nov 10, 2006 23:23

Series: Finding
Title: Third No 
Sub-Series: Five Times No  from prompt by
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finding, jayne, river, no

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razycrandomgirl November 13 2006, 07:11:59 UTC
Intense! =-o !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

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ceslas November 13 2006, 07:14:56 UTC
{{{{{{{{{{{{{{HUGS}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}} It will be all right, I promise!

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bookaddict43 November 13 2006, 14:00:19 UTC
Poor River :( Her reaction was maybe expectable considering what happened to her.

She felt his tension in the corded muscles of his neck, the arms deceptively relaxed around her, vibrating. Love this line, its beautiful and the lovely words like lucidity,tangy spice just make this chapter more beautiful.

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ceslas November 13 2006, 18:01:39 UTC
Oh so happy you liked it. *Happy dancing* It was a long hard chapter to write- getting the words right ;)

I love English, it is so rich and full of possibilities. The expression that a picture is worth a 1000 words- I want the words! :0)

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