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cero_ate

Lost Batling, Part Two

Nov 07, 2006 08:11

Title: Lost Batling part two
Disclaimer: Don’t own, wish I did
Rating: R
Characters: Bat clan, Dinah, Roy, Selina
Series: Robin’s of Gotham Other parts here.
Summary: Prep and then retrieval. Please read part one
first.
A/N: A thousand and one thanks to pervyficgirl for beta’ing and helping with the research for this. Thanks to jen_in_japan for the title.

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jason, dick, tim, rog, damian, kon, team: batclan, character: bruce wayne, roy, selina, character: barbara gordon, dinah, fic

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cero_ate November 8 2006, 17:22:18 UTC

*sigh* so them

Glad to hear it.

Thank you!!!!! That is so what Roy had to have gone thru, learning about Connor, and his relationship with Ollie so screwed up. Sometimes the writers work it right, sometimes they goof, but in my canon…that's exactly it, blood or no blood, those boys are firstborn.

Exactly. Whether they like it or not, those boys are the ones that were there first, had the worst mistakes on, and are the first born, no matter what.

*squee* I love your Roy.

Yay! My Roy gets a lot more screen time than I planned originally. Fixing bat-boys is such hard work.

And your Tim/Kon….you come damn close to unseating amarin_rose for most married Tim/Kon

Gosh, thanks. Tim and Kon are right now in the honeymoon phase and I'm not too anxious to get them out of it.

The entire scene with Selina and Bats….awww….Been watching B: TAS a lot this week since my son is sick and camping under my butt, and the Catwoman eps keep reminding me why she was the other half of my OTP for Bruce, het wise.I'm sorry your son's sick, it seems to be going ( ... )

hyperactivator November 7 2006, 21:27:26 UTC

Yes! And this Damien hasn't been ruined yet! "Dami" I love that.

cero_ate November 8 2006, 17:22:56 UTC

Glad you liked, Damie just randomly occured to me. And I'm not letting this one get ruined.

vespa331 November 9 2006, 04:54:50 UTC

Your version of this is So much better than canon. It's driving me nuts the way they keep forgetting that Dick is Bruce's first son, first adopting Tim without talking to Dick and then Damien, argh. It actually really freaked me out to read such a nice Damien, I kept expecting that it was a ploy to lull them into a false sense of security :D

cero_ate November 9 2006, 21:37:42 UTC

Thanks! I try to fix canon's missteps a bit. Exactly, though the Tim doesn't bug me for that particular reason, more to the point of he already went to great lengths to not be adopted earlier... My Damian's just a kid rght now, and hasn't gotten corrupted.

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cero_ate November 9 2006, 21:44:51 UTC

Always a good thing to hear.

I really can't picture her being clingy, it just doesn't work for her personality. Mind she does have her limits.

Exactly yes. And go ahead and scream. I loved writing the conversation between Dick and Roy, it just flowed so easily.

I'm mostly about the characterization and I had a lot of fun trying to figure out where everyone was and what they were doing, and with whom.

*grin* They insisted.

I love Pervy Jason too, and he claims that Cassie wouldn't mind so long as she got to watch as well.

My second Bat series was the lead up to No Man's Land, and I just fell in love with the two of them working together in those.

Psycho Bat scary. Everyone knows this. And of course he's gonna pop up if his boys are injured.

Who else would do it?

Glad you like him. He's a bit of a brat, but not inherently evil, corrupted hellspawn.

jij November 9 2006, 14:04:24 UTC

Holy--! I don't even know where to start with this. You're really getting on a roll here, I have to say. I love the action, the fighting, the character touches everywhere--it honest to God just keeps getting better and better.

The structure of the beginning--all the different couples preparing themselves for the assault, their different ways of coping--was just fantastic. Dick/Roy! Tim/Kon! Dinah/Barbara! *excited squeeing breaks out in Japan*

Besides, he definitely had good taste.

*Squeeing continues at an even higher pitch* You know, that's really all I need, too. :) And I do love your Selina here. She's kick-ass. The scene with her and Canary at the very end--whoa.

And I love, love, love scenes where people make the terrible, terrible mistake of taking out one of the Bat's own and pay the price for it ( ... )

cero_ate November 9 2006, 21:48:51 UTC

I'm glad you're enjoying the trip. It's been a long road already, at last count, it's about forty some odd stories. And I'd worry if I were getting worse. That would be bad.

Those were fun, trying to figure out where everyone was and what they were doing.

*grin* Selina is a joy to write and of course he has good taste. I had fun with that last scene. Would you mess with their group?

That's a stupid move on their part and they did it twice over. Very scary Batman.

It's been interesting, trying to find what works best and finding new ways of doing it. Rose and Jason was pretty randomly created. I was trying to work on this and they suddenly decided to spar and wanted it written immediately. There's more to come.

jij November 10 2006, 04:57:40 UTC

40 stories! It seems like just yesterday...LOL.

And I'd worry if I were getting worse. That would be bad.

Certainly...though it does happen sometimes. And I think most people find what they're comfortable with and just stay there, frankly. So you give me hope. :)