You know, I thought Rush/Young/Eli were my OT3 for this fandom, but you just converted me. This was just insanely sexy and wonderful, especially the part about Young letting go.
There was sex, and TJ and a threesome and Sex and Rush/Young and mind-linking and SEX!
Wow, this is the most amazing, brilliant thing ever.
This line is just perfect: “He tries so hard to want to go back to his wife that he actually starts to believe it.”
YESYESYES. That is exactly Young.
and TJ is such a fangirl: Young seals the kiss, going deep fast, parting Rush’s lips. And she can’t really be jealous anymore, she’s mostly just transfixed.
I love how despite the mind-link it's TJ who understands what they need. And I think the characterisation is wonderful, she quite clearly has feelings for both of them, but she's also got the medic/carer impulse going on and that's really sweet.
And the boys, even though they're in each other's heads still can't let go of all their emotional baggage and relationship history.
So basically this is even more brilliant and perfect than I expected.
OH GOOD I was worried you'd be like "wtf is TJ doing there" but, really, this fic just demanded it. I was going to have it be a short, relatively porny thing set after Broccoli Trees, and I started it off in Rush's POV, and the fic was like, ha, you think you can explore Rush's psyche? Think again!
-- so it ended up being TJ's view, from the outside of the relationship, and then I had to start it from much earlier to establish what she was feeling and thinking, and then it turned into a threesome.
And that's my story.
I'm pretty sure, beyond that, that you just nailed everything I was going for, from TJ's external presence to how being in someone's head doesn't necessarily make you an expert on them.
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I'm sure I'll have something brilliant and coherent to say a bit later. But, for now, l really liked this.
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Feel better, lady.
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You know, I thought Rush/Young/Eli were my OT3 for this fandom, but you just converted me. This was just insanely sexy and wonderful, especially the part about Young letting go.
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There was sex, and TJ and a threesome and Sex and Rush/Young and mind-linking and SEX!
Wow, this is the most amazing, brilliant thing ever.
This line is just perfect:
“He tries so hard to want to go back to his wife that he actually starts to believe it.”
YESYESYES. That is exactly Young.
and TJ is such a fangirl:
Young seals the kiss, going deep fast, parting Rush’s lips. And she can’t really be jealous anymore, she’s mostly just transfixed.
I love how despite the mind-link it's TJ who understands what they need. And I think the characterisation is wonderful, she quite clearly has feelings for both of them, but she's also got the medic/carer impulse going on and that's really sweet.
And the boys, even though they're in each other's heads still can't let go of all their emotional baggage and relationship history.
So basically this is even more brilliant and perfect than I expected.
Thank you.
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-- so it ended up being TJ's view, from the outside of the relationship, and then I had to start it from much earlier to establish what she was feeling and thinking, and then it turned into a threesome.
And that's my story.
I'm pretty sure, beyond that, that you just nailed everything I was going for, from TJ's external presence to how being in someone's head doesn't necessarily make you an expert on them.
Anyway. I'm really glad you liked!
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I'm glad you liked!
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