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trancexgemini November 10 2009, 16:54:13 UTC
Three favorite characters having sex = FTW. ♥ ♥

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cerebel November 10 2009, 17:49:17 UTC
Indeed; indeed. Glad you liked!

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bionic November 10 2009, 19:00:28 UTC
Hotness! Wonderful wonderful fic. You totally made the threesome work :D I love how you write TJ, too.

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cerebel November 10 2009, 23:29:39 UTC
Thank you! It was my first try, on TJ, so I was a little nervous about her. I'm glad you liked!

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shena8 November 10 2009, 20:31:44 UTC
OMG, this was so damn hot..I hope this happens A LOT now... I thought your observations of Young are spot-on, and TJ is wonderful in her empathy. Please write more, and thanks for sharing this!

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cerebel November 10 2009, 23:30:10 UTC
Thank you! And, I'll do my best. I'm glad you liked ^_^

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astral_angel November 10 2009, 20:56:55 UTC
Oh man, you've combined both my het pairs for this show and made it a hot threesome - and I had sworn that I wouldn't have an OT3 for this show. :P

Seriously, this was really well written - I love that it was in TJ's POV and how we got to see her thoughts on Young and Rush and the 'ship between Young and Rush. Also, this was hot, y'know, which is always good. Hope to see more of this trio from you at some point!

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cerebel November 10 2009, 23:32:32 UTC
You know, I didn't really ship TJ/Rush until I started writing this. And the fic itself kind of demanded to be from TJ's POV, and then, as it went on, I realized that there was literally no way it wasn't going to end in a threesome, so I just ran with it. And now TJ/Rush sounds a lot more appealing, on the whole.

I'm glad you liked!

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solaras November 10 2009, 22:57:35 UTC
This is just perfect, as usual. Young and Rush would still be bumping heads, even with a mind link.
The POV worked really well, and I loved seeing what the ship was like without Y and R there; it made for a very insightful reminder that these really are the wrong people to be on Destiny.
And of course the threesome was awesomely hot. ;)

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cerebel November 10 2009, 23:35:26 UTC
Of course. Telepathy doesn't solve relationship problems. It just creates a whole fun new set of them!

Yeah, I honestly think the expedition would fall apart if a) Young, b) Rush and/or c) TJ were removed from the ship. If you get rid of the legitimate leader, it leaves a power vacuum; if you get rid of the scientist, suddenly the ship gets a lot more dangerous and unknowable; and if you get rid of the medic, people start dying.

I'm glad you liked!

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