Fic: Sweet Dreams (Heroes)

Aug 07, 2007 00:43

Is he dreaming?

It doesn’t feel like a dream. It’s too vivid, the sensory details too exact. Mohinder can hear the slight echo of his footsteps - he can feel cool tile against his feet. Dreams are a little blurry, a little off, like things don’t really exist unless you’re looking right at them.

Mohinder cautiously makes his way up the ( Read more... )

heroes: mohinder/sylar, heroes

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ivy_b August 7 2007, 10:40:10 UTC
Does this mean that Sylar killed the Indian boy? I really liked this story, the way it builds up, the slight variations and alterations from cannon. Then to have Sylar be the one behind it, showing Mohinder what they could have had and actually letting him experience it that one time. I loved the ending, great job.

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cerebel August 7 2007, 19:44:20 UTC
Yep. There's no other way for him to have the power. I was going to put something in clarifying that, but I didn't think the story really needed it.

Thank you! I'm glad you liked :)

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flo_nelja August 7 2007, 11:37:23 UTC
Wow. It was fascinating. All the dream sequences were good by themselves, so full of unfilled potentialities ans symbolic values at the same time, and with the story with it, it was even better, and I love also that the ending is happy but not totally fluff.

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cerebel August 7 2007, 19:48:45 UTC
Mohinder/Sylar doesn't exactly lend itself to fluff. I like showing the potential of it, but at the same time, they can never really have a normal relationship.

Thank you! I'm glad you liked ^_^

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ej_fanart August 7 2007, 12:21:23 UTC
My god, this is just unbelievably BEAUTIFUL!!!!

I haven't got the foggiest idea how you do this, but it's truly magical!!!

Thank you soooo much!!! :)

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cerebel August 7 2007, 19:49:14 UTC
Well, thank you - I appreciate that.

You're welcome, and I'm glad you liked ^_^

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herverylowness August 7 2007, 12:22:17 UTC
Oh wow! Beautiful!

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cerebel August 7 2007, 19:49:26 UTC
Thanks! :D

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ex_nothingto835 August 7 2007, 12:37:31 UTC
Ok, so I was at work, and I saw you'd posted, and I actually said "EEP". Out loud. I said "eep". And people wanted to know WHY I said "eep"- and I actually wanted to say MY FAVOURITE FIC WRITER EVER HAS JUST POSTED. And I couldn't. Because, you know, WORK.
This is the best yet. The way that you used parts of the show- especially transferring what Gabriel told his mother onto Zane...inspired, and awesome, and there aren't enough superlatives. Never stop writing Mylar. You make it beautiful. As if it wasn't already.
*loves you in a non-creepy way*

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cerebel August 7 2007, 19:52:43 UTC
LMAO. Cerebel - creating awkward workplace situations all around the globe :P

Well, in the actual episode, Sylar went to the closest person that could provide him with reassurance. He tried for Mohinder, but Mohinder rejected him. If he were still Zane Taylor, I can definitely see him trying to get Mohinder to tell him that he doesn't have to be special, that he doesn't have to be Sylar anymore. Especially since that would almost be forgiveness for what he did to Mohinder's father.

Thank you ^_^ I'm glad you liked!

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