Fic: Sweet Dreams (Heroes)

[cerebel]

Is he dreaming?

It doesn’t feel like a dream. It’s too vivid, the sensory details too exact. Mohinder can hear the slight echo of his footsteps - he can feel cool tile against his feet. Dreams are a little blurry, a little off, like things don’t really exist unless you’re looking right at them.

Mohinder cautiously makes his way up the

Comments

[cerebel]

Fic writing is a horrible, horrible addiction...which it doesn't look like I'll be shaking, any time soon.

Thank you! ^_^

[fool_of_ships]

I don't have any idea why I, as a non-Mylar person, picked this up, but hoo boy am I glad I did. You do the unreliable narrator like whoa and for that I am in awe. Huge freshly-baked cookies to you.

[cerebel]

Yay cookies :D

Well, thank you. I try to make my fics readable to those who don't ordinarily read the pairing, and I'm glad you enjoyed :)

[mistressmerr]

Oh, now that was just fantastic. The way the bits from the show were weaved into the different circumstances continually had me going 'Oh COOL!' Just the whole concept of Sylar showing Mohinder his side of everything while also showing what could have been is just great and the execution was flawless. Sylar killing himself in that... let's call it a timeline?... was so unexpected but it fit. And his pain at the end to match, just wow. Wonderful showing.

[cerebel]

Yeah. I was completely stealing dialogue wholesale from some transcripts online. Most of it, though, I put in a different setting, so it's not completely ripping the episode off -_-

Thank you! I'm glad you liked :)

[entangled_now]

This is fantastic, I love the idea and the way you wrote it, and Sylar's sense of beautiful desperation at the end. Great stuff.

[cerebel]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked ^_^

[dodificus]

I seriously think that at this point you could write just about anything and it would be gold. This was so great.

[cerebel]

LOL. Thank you, I appreciate that ^_^ I'm glad you liked.