Comments | celtic_flicka: VM Fic: A Hallmark Holiday (Veronica, Logan, Mac, Wallace) PG-13

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VM Fic: A Hallmark Holiday (Veronica, Logan, Mac, Wallace) PG-13

Feb 09, 2009 19:19

Title: A Hallmark Holiday

Pairing/Character: Veronica, Logan, Mac, Wallace
Word Count: ~4,000
Rating: PG-13 (implied sexual situations)
Summary: “So this is staking out, huh? It looks sexier in the movies.”
Spoilers: A few specifics from Season 3, but the story will make a lot more sense if you know Veronica and Logan’s history.
Disclaimer: If Rob ( Read more... )

wallace, veronica, logan/veronica, mac, logan, vm fic, veronica mars

Comments 52

dragynflies February 10 2009, 05:41:04 UTC

Ohh, this was so beautiful. I loved Mac coming to Logan's defense, I loved the letters that Logan left Veronica, I loved that it took the FBI internship for Veronica to see what everyone else did...and I loved the ending.

How much do I have to pay you to get the continuation? :)

celtic_flicka February 10 2009, 17:17:53 UTC

You're offering to pay for porn when there's so much out there for free? ;)

Thanks for the comment--I'm glad you liked it!

dragynflies February 11 2009, 06:52:02 UTC

For this? I'd pay. Cash money. Or y'know, whatever! Lol. Your two love pieces that go together...forgive me the fact that I can't remember their titles right now...are my favorite oneshots in the vm fandom! That means your porn wins! Lol

celtic_flicka February 11 2009, 13:39:36 UTC

Do you mean Unbearable and Something Good? I think those are my porniest stories (other than the one I wrote for your Secret Santa ;) ). If so, thanks! <3

onceuponapillow February 10 2009, 08:48:27 UTC

Love the flashbacks. Wallace teasing Veronica about Logan was so funny.

And I just loved Mac defending Logan to Veronica. I heart Mac & Logan as buds -so much so that I'm using my Mac/Logan icon :)

I love when people write Logan and Veronica spending some time apart and dealing with their indevidual issues and learning to be friends. I think its what they truly need and I would have loved to see that on the show.

I loved all L & V's conversations, Logan's anger at the thought of her patronizing him, their joking, etc

Loved the little bit with the car chase (Logan should have helped with more cases on the show), and of course their reunion. Perfect.

celtic_flicka February 10 2009, 17:22:41 UTC

I love your icon! What ep is it from? I can't even think of when that would have happened. And if you like Mac/Logan buddy fic, you're going to like your birthday story. :)

It seemed to me that Mac was usually able to be pretty honest with V, and we do know that she liked Logan when he wasn't with V, so I liked the idea of her being the one to tell V to can it.

onceuponapillow February 10 2009, 21:51:11 UTC

Geez, its been a looong time since I watched season 3 -I still have some unresolved anger lol- I believe it was episode 17(The Debasement Tapes)

Yay! I seriously just love them. Logan needs a friend like Mac, she is kind, honest, loyal, and smart.

I liked it too. And I like that Veronica actually listened rather than getting snarky. That girl needed to learn to take constructive critisism.

celtic_flicka February 11 2009, 13:41:27 UTC

You're right--I just looked at the screencaps and it's Debasement Tapes. I forgot about that scene where they're together on the couch (vs. the one where he's standing behind her "subtly" grilling her about V/Piz).

afrocurl February 10 2009, 18:55:22 UTC

I really love this--the way it feels like a progression for these two from where they had been and to where I think they're going after this.

celtic_flicka February 11 2009, 00:00:14 UTC

Thank you! I originally intended to end this story in the back seat of the Saturn (if you know what I mean and I think you do) but I decided it worked better to have them taking off together at the end (with Logan in the driver's seat of Veronica's car...)

afrocurl February 11 2009, 00:05:27 UTC

Does this icon get the point across?

celtic_flicka February 11 2009, 00:06:30 UTC

HAHAHAHA!

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bkell13 February 10 2009, 20:02:37 UTC

This was AWESOME! I love reading and feeling the tension and then the adorable-ness that is LoVe :P. I also really liked Logan's Valentine's Day rant...so true!

celtic_flicka February 11 2009, 00:01:28 UTC

That rant is stolen from Mr. chynaj, but I generally agree as well!

Thanks for your nice comments!

zaftig_darling February 11 2009, 03:47:47 UTC

Has Logan been eavesdropping on my husband - talking about Valentine's Day? It's eerily familiar...

I read this last night on my husband's new i-touch (the gift I was somewhat obligated to buy after putting his i-pod through the washing machine...) - and I loved it. But I couldn't figure out how to post a comment from such a tiny screen. So, I've just now re-read and I think I love it even more. Very nice.

celtic_flicka February 11 2009, 04:57:45 UTC

Hee. Logan's more smartass comments in my fics are sometimes adapted from my husband's smartass comments--that V Day rant included. :) I thought he was a killjoy when we were younger, but in my old age, I'm beginning to agree with him.

I'm so glad you liked this! (And the new iTouch--my dad has one and I covet it...)