Fic: Settle the Score (6/?)

Jul 18, 2010 01:56

Title: Settle the Score (6/?)
Author: cellochick92 
Rating: R, for language and mature content 
Word Count: 1332
Warning: Account/discussion of abuse.
Disclaimer:  Nothing is mine =(
Summary: For xrainingsorrowx ’s prompt over at the rq_angst meme.  “Quinn abused Rachel for so long, so she feels it's okay if Rachel returns the favor.”

A/N:  Stupid writer's block.  I feel ( Read more... )

fic: settle the score, rachel/quinn

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newbie_2u July 18 2010, 11:59:28 UTC
Wow, you did a wonderful job of building the tension here. You've also captured the intimacy of the moment and both girls emotion unbelievably well. And now on to the big question -Why? Really looking forward to more...

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cellochick92 July 18 2010, 17:52:23 UTC
Thanks, im glad the emotion came through =)

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cellochick92 July 18 2010, 17:53:03 UTC
Thanks =) Hopefully it'll go away soon? Lol

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gleek1104 July 18 2010, 12:11:53 UTC
This story has got me hooked. I love the little details that you put in. It seems so real. Great job. Can't wait for more.

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cellochick92 July 18 2010, 17:54:24 UTC
Thanks, im glad you like the little details...those are the things that i like writing the most =) Thanks for reading!

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xrainingsorrowx July 18 2010, 13:35:50 UTC
Damn! I didn't get this chapters' comment virginity.. (The one day I decide to go to sleep early..)

Oh well.

This is my new favorite chapter! I completely loved how you portrayed both Quinn and Rachel. The emotion radiating from both the girls was all wow-like.

I'm glad that Quinn asked 'Why?' and I can't wait until Rachel provides an answer! :D

Oh. I wrote something to your writer's block.

Dear Writer's Block,

Go the fuck away. You're not welcome any longer.

Thank you.

Sincerely,

Rain

There I don't think that writer's block is going to bother you anymore. (Letters, FTMFW!)

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cellochick92 July 18 2010, 17:57:45 UTC
Damn. Im disappointed in you. Hahahahaha but really, one for six isn't too bad, i posted it at a really funky hour anyways, so it would have been like 5am for you =)

Yay, glad you got the emotion, it's *sort of* really important in the fic, soooo....yeah. ;)

Oh, and my writer's block has a response:

Dear Rain,

I'll do whatever the fuck i want. You're not the boss of me!!!

Muahahahahahahahaha.

Sincerely,

Writer's Block

Hahah maybe you just need to be more intimidating??? ;D

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xrainingsorrowx July 18 2010, 18:37:26 UTC
Lol yeah. I like woke up at like 7-ish and after I knocked out my chores really quick, I looked and I was like "YAY UPDATE!" Then I read it and I was all like "COMMENT TIME!" Then I saw there were already THREE comments (and that's good for you but...) and I was all like (to the 3 commenters before me) "Fuck you all..." Lol then I felt bad (not really) because I don't know those commenters lol.

Emotion, important? I would have never guessed! Lol

I've got a response to your writer's block response!!

Dear Prick Mr. Writer's Block ( ... )

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cellochick92 July 18 2010, 21:57:43 UTC
Ahahaha poor other commenters =)

Andddddddd....my writers block has yet another response:

Dear Raining fucking Sorrow,

After careful consideration of your last letter, I have decided to review my choice.

I will consider removing my painfully large block from cello's brain...granted, it's not a guarantee, but perhaps we can work something out.

I would, however, like to point out that i dont watch tv during the summer, which leads me to doubt your supposed connections. Just saying.

If you have anything other than vague threats that might be more persuasive, please feel free to contact me again.

Sincerely,

Writer's fucking Block (Clarification: Not a block on which writer's fuck. Cause that would be awkward.)

Lol

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silentinformer July 18 2010, 13:43:43 UTC
I was really happy to see an update to this first thing this morning and I so wasn't disappointed. This chapter is really good poor Quinn I literally went awwww at, "she wondered briefly if she hadn’t died and fallen into some alternate universe." I do like the fact that Quinn finally seems to realise that she should be somewhat cautious around Rachel and that her desire to change atm is just that a want to not the actual reality yet. Heres to hoping you kick the shit outta that writers block and continue to write this fantastic story. :)

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cellochick92 July 18 2010, 17:59:47 UTC
Haha gotta love a little fic to start the day off right ;) And yeah, rachel's going to have to work for it this time, lol!

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