Johnny's Record Store AU Fic of JE Boys

Aug 11, 2008 01:24

Johnny’s Record Store
PG
Yes, of course, here's another AU story. As if there wasn't enough in this fandom.
Not beta-ed so you can play "Spot the blatant error." XD
It's also an ongoing thing, I'll possibly bore you all to death with drabbles from this universe.

Another AU, oh my )

characterization needs major work, bad fic, no i don't really write fic, iheartuchi

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trivialaffair August 11 2008, 20:46:09 UTC
How did I not see this yesterday night?

What Kame really wanted to say was that it was against regulations…

Er, I think there were more, but that’s the only one I remember.
ANYWAY. BESIDES THAT. !!!! When you said you were going to make all of Johnny’s work at the record store, you meant it! Sooo many cameos, and I love how the fic focused on Kame and Uchi (so random but so awesome).

So yes…thanks for sharing this XD write more!! And of course I would tell you this haha

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ceathair August 11 2008, 21:13:49 UTC
Those parts did focus on Uchi and Kame, but the fun with this piece is that I can play with them ALL !!

I'm writing one ficlet with Koyama in this universe especially for you!

I'll try to correct the typos and errors, thanks for pointing out that one.

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trivialaffair August 11 2008, 21:41:48 UTC
XD yaaay for playing around with JE characters.

!! at your icon, and !!!! at you writing Koyama. XD (you really know how to make me happy, don't you?)

and no prob.

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blufox_o7 August 12 2008, 00:21:09 UTC
Errors were mainly tense problems and plural forms. It's easy to spot them when you'd reread this work a week later. That way the story is not that "fresh" in your mind and you can spot the errors easily. :)

That's okay, I have no beta myself and that's how I try to edit my works. However, I just usually do it mentally coz I'm lazy to press the edit button 99% of the time, lol.

It's actually a nice read. :)

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ceathair August 12 2008, 00:55:56 UTC
Verbs tense? There is a plural form in English? Lol, I think I'm tired these days if I'm asking those questions. This fic had been in my laptop for so long and I thought I had posted it. Apparently I had been waiting for it to not be fresh in my head to edit it but I posted it instead XD!

Thank you for liking it nevertheless. I do my best to honnour my favorite JE guy. For someone without a beta, you write incredibly well.

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minami_yu October 4 2008, 15:16:57 UTC
Uchi and the "drunk" mark on his forehead.Poor lad.He was just too young back then.
I liked this one too~

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ceathair October 4 2008, 20:53:20 UTC
Hi~

Lol, I'm a bit surprised to receive a review for this fic. It often feels like I only have 3 readers, so when someone else leave a comment I suddenly remember that I didn't post it FO!!!

Thank you for your message, I'm glad you liked it. There is at least another entry for this AU that I'm going to post soon. Hope you enjoy it too.

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minami_yu October 4 2008, 23:10:43 UTC
Please dont make your fics FO,please~
i dont get to found a lot of eito fics.
Or maybe you can allow me to be your friend than you can FO them.
Please~

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ceathair October 4 2008, 23:32:51 UTC
Well, I was thinking of doing a post with links of my fics, since there are already quite a lot more than I thought!

There isn't a lot of Eito fic? I know a lot of good authors that write them. Here's a rec list that someone I know made. But most of them are not writting much these days, it's really sad. I know a lot of good authors.

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minami_yu October 4 2008, 23:12:05 UTC
And your fics is one of the good view.

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kriszeth October 8 2008, 03:55:03 UTC
read this one too. *sparkly hopeful look*
there is more from this one too, isn't there?

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