Numb3rs Ficathon Fic-Mice and Men

[ceares]

Title: Mice and MenAuthor: Ceares

Comments

[audrarose]

"I left my handcuffs in the hotel room."

Best. Opener. Ever.

You nailed David's characterization perfectly. And even though I can't believed that kissing Charlie would just be pleasant *bg*, I completely believed the David/Cooper dynamic. Cooper would SO be able to make David lose control, but he's not going to let him get hurt, either. *melt*

Great story!

[ceares]

Thank you very much! And believe it or not the handcuff line came from real life. That's actually what sort of inspired the story-unfortunately, I was the desk clerk in the scenario *g*.

[ceares]

Thanks! I was worried about doing David and Coop sense info is so limited. I'm glad it worked for you.

I was looking for places in northern ca for Coop and through a typo in the yahoo search stumbled upon a spot in Oregon-I figured it was kismet.

[wrenlet]

David got some! *cheers wildly* :D

David keeping the handcuffs for a week, his "plan", kissing Charlie! Just love it :D

[ceares]

Thanks! Glad you liked it. David deserves a little love too*g*.

[penguingal]

Spot. on. David characterization. I absolutely adored this and I'm glad to see there's a companion piece. The Don/Charlie undertones are just perfect. And I'm with everyone who is thrilled to see David get some lovin'! :D

[ceares]

Thank you so much! The characterizations were my main worry. I'm glad they work for you.