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Entourage fic-Lucky (V/E)

Oct 28, 2008 22:19

Title:Lucky
Author:Ceares
Fandom:Entourage
Pairing: Vince/Eric
Rating: TV-A
Warnings: Very minor mentions of characters/events for all seasons.
Notes:This was written for pocketfullof for the Fandomfreeforall. Not sure it's exactly what you were looking for, but I hope you enjoy it ( Read more... )

fic, entourage, v/e, fandomfreeforall

Comments 36

justabi October 29 2008, 06:57:35 UTC

Awww. I love how cool Vince is about his big gay epiphany and how cute Eric is about the anniversary thing. Adorable.

ceares October 29 2008, 15:24:16 UTC

Yay! Glad you liked it. Thank you.

pocketfullof November 2 2008, 21:07:29 UTC

Oh. man. I'm sorry I didn't get to this sooner. It's WONDERFUL. There's so much I like about - the easy way they connect, their obvious affection, kissing in an elevator and E's response after, particularly rubbing his mouth. I love how they come out, and how Ari calls E 'Mighty Mouse' (ahahahaha), and how perfectly you nailed the dynamic between all of them, Shauna being supportive, and Ari jumping from rant to rant and Drama and Turtle making bets. Really, this is just fantastic. Thank you so so so much!

ceares November 3 2008, 06:11:54 UTC

Thank you for the terrific feedback, and I'm so very glad you liked it! :-)

out_there November 9 2008, 23:19:10 UTC

“Besides, Vin you’ve always flirted with me.”

Huh. "So when I kissed you?"

"I just went with it."

Vince stares at him. "Wow! I feel like our whole relationship has been built on a lie."

E shrugs. "Looks like. So, should we break up? It would make Ari happy."

I love that dialogue so much. Honestly, I love the whole story -- Vince's idea of pre-dating, and his optimism as to how the others will take it (and Eric's matching worry about it) -- and the way that the entire relationship seems... easy. The way their friendship is easy: other stresses come and go, things happy, there are crises, but spending time with each other is never difficult.

I love it all, but I utterly love the ending dialogue, the way that being together doesn't stop the teasing and joking because they're still *them*.

ceares November 10 2008, 07:06:35 UTC

Oh my gosh! Thank you so much. I admit I really like that little part as well, and I'm so glad it worked for you.

deluweil November 10 2008, 08:06:28 UTC

This was so adorable!!

ceares November 10 2008, 21:10:51 UTC

*G* Thank you! I find them kind of utterly adorable.

deluweil November 11 2008, 10:26:03 UTC

They totally are :)

oximore November 10 2008, 08:21:20 UTC

Great! I loved it! :D

ceares November 10 2008, 21:11:24 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it.