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Fic: Stark Contrast

Apr 14, 2009 20:53

Title: Stark Contrast
Author: Catslove17
Fandom: Japanese Popular Culture
Pairing:Maki/Shige
Genre: Realism
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1049
Disclaimer: These people would cringe knowing that I'm using them like this. I got my info from Shige's CR group
Summary: Prince Charming is very different from Maki's imaginings
Author's Notes: There are so many ( Read more... )

Comments 8

Oh--- naivelittleme April 14 2009, 11:41:02 UTC

...I think I just started to like Shige just now, because I LOVE the way you write his character ( or rather, they way Maki's describing him, but you know what I mean ;3). xcry is a lucky girl to have something this beautiful written for her♥

Re: Oh--- catslove17 April 14 2009, 12:33:40 UTC

you're too freaking nice and you're my friend and therefore obligated to say it. I'm so glad you say it. It makes me feel all glowy and shinny inside.

She wrote me a fic last year, so I thought I'd write her one back this year!

My writing isn't what it use to be, and I don't feel very confident at the moment ....

Re: Oh--- naivelittleme April 15 2009, 20:28:30 UTC

Oh no, you can't say that! Seriously, I'd KILL, for your talent!! Have more confidence, I mean, you do not only have a great vocabulary, personal style but you make the words speak real feelings, and that my friend, is great talent. I've read tons of works, fics, essays, poems, bleh, whatever, and at least 85% of the time the writer doesn't have fucking clue of what they're writing about, and even if they do, the feelings doesn't come across. And when they don't, all the experience in the world doesn't matter. But your works matters, and so do you♥

And I chose my one and only Pi-icon, because Pi with normal hair makes me happy ( so random, but I'm supposed to be asleep now, so I hope you bear with me and my stupid comments ).
Oh, another thing that makes my closet fangirl squee is that Maki's a long lost mother of six, starting yesterday! Yay!

Re: Oh--- catslove17 April 16 2009, 15:38:34 UTC

I think I'd use good to describe me, but there is so much room for improvement ( ... )

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Have Maru, he's my favourite catslove17 April 14 2009, 13:35:16 UTC

I'd like to be both interesting and good. But we can't all get what we want can we?

It was kinda cliche. I had this habit of ending each paragraph with a cliche. At one point I had [i]The start of something new[/i]. Sad huh?

Read like Shige's drama wiki page? You mean bare and practically non0existant.

I have had limited inspiration lately. Kind of a slump. I use to want to write but not much anymore. I wish I could write fics for every flist member. But it is not going to happen.

And I'm glad you don't know Shige, because otherwise this would've seemed extremely OOC. Which it is.

Thank you so much though, because secretly I love your comments. And I just know if someone replies with a flame, you'll be there for me like you were last time. : D you're awesome. (and I did like the indecent exposure bit. Though I bet shige is no fun at all)

;alsdkfjlsadfjlsaueopaijdf *more keyboard smashing* xcry April 15 2009, 02:26:23 UTC

ILU, you know that?

Again, you guys really spoil me too much, and know just what I love most...ok...second. Haha.

I love how you described Shige, and how he's this perfect charming gentleman Maki dreams of. It's cute. He's this. He's that. The whole meeting at a rock band thing, XD. Maki liking Rock? That's kinda funny and hard to imagine, but whatever gets the two pretties together.

My favorite part: She always runs her fingers up and down his ribcage inside his t-shirts, pressed up against a wall, under the covers, in broad daylight if she feels particularly brave. She knows his soft spots like no other, and brushes her fingers delicately across his pierced belly button to the rhythm their kisses

DAMNIT, THAT WAS HAWT.

Pudgy!Shige...How, cute to imagine that...

ILU ILU ILU.

Thank you for this.

What you said about me made me cry tears of happiness. You're too sweet. <33

Re: ;alsdkfjlsadfjlsaueopaijdf *more keyboard smashing* catslove17 April 16 2009, 15:34:25 UTC

Thanks.

It's always your approval I seek anyway.

I tried to do a whole [i]what Maki wants in a boyfriend[/i] vs [i]what you really get in life for a boyfriend[/i] and although they're suppose to be opposites (and tried to create really extreme circumstances like the rock concert), and essentially they are obviously some things had to be retained.

I also really wanted Shige to have a tatoo ...... but I have no idea of what.

Thanks so much, for reading and commenting!

Take my heart. I don't need it anyway/